tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post1221638328753067632..comments2024-03-10T05:18:37.521-04:00Comments on Stories From A Starry Sky: Weekend Writing Warriors April 1, 2018Teresa Cypherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-80429562357657070292018-04-02T20:44:28.622-04:002018-04-02T20:44:28.622-04:00This law seems very biased towards slavers... make...This law seems very biased towards slavers... makes me wonder what's up with this new lord.<br />I missed the list, but my post's here if you want. :) <a href="https://caitlinsternwrites.wordpress.com/2018/03/31/weekend-writing-warriors-3-31/" rel="nofollow">WeWriWa post</a>Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18141508426287090331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-35905139467491380092018-04-01T19:53:47.115-04:002018-04-01T19:53:47.115-04:00Uh oh, I like how new wrinkles just keep appearing...Uh oh, I like how new wrinkles just keep appearing here. Good plot developments to ponder (and worry about over, on behalf of our heroine of course!). Great snippet!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-59291892863640133572018-04-01T19:12:32.289-04:002018-04-01T19:12:32.289-04:00It sounds like Lord Milsand Dhor has terms that ig...It sounds like Lord Milsand Dhor has terms that ignore prevailing laws. What a great set up for conflict that is obviously going to follow.Libby Campbellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00730858605854157221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-85735529345402414512018-04-01T18:43:22.683-04:002018-04-01T18:43:22.683-04:00Oooh, very tense scene. It looks like Theusand mig...Oooh, very tense scene. It looks like Theusand might be about to gain the upper hand!Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-28968669072851459612018-04-01T16:27:13.309-04:002018-04-01T16:27:13.309-04:00Did someone make a mistake, or is it meant to prov...Did someone make a mistake, or is it meant to provoke Theusand? Aurora Springerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10368905407459425208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-16201552235233838212018-04-01T13:03:12.195-04:002018-04-01T13:03:12.195-04:00Will he continue to push? Tense snippet!Will he continue to push? Tense snippet!Elyzabeth M. VaLeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-71300328061904819382018-04-01T12:59:00.574-04:002018-04-01T12:59:00.574-04:00I wonder which of them will give in? Great snippet...I wonder which of them will give in? Great snippet.Christiane France - Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05917176687544964756noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-38943461696366015882018-04-01T12:02:40.130-04:002018-04-01T12:02:40.130-04:00Hmm, sounds like Theusand won't be able to arg...Hmm, sounds like Theusand won't be able to argue with royalty! Amy Braunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07333226005270392991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-36985792341041617552018-04-01T11:24:10.678-04:002018-04-01T11:24:10.678-04:00Oh, sounds like His Eminence is someone not to be ...Oh, sounds like His Eminence is someone not to be messed with. More trouble ahead if Thousand continues to push, I suspect.Alexis Duranhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15582838606796213690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-91247616728487627092018-04-01T10:51:17.250-04:002018-04-01T10:51:17.250-04:00Dhor'en law is surely causing tension in this ...Dhor'en law is surely causing tension in this snippet. Hard to see if Theusand can stop it at this point. Nice snippet!Frank Fisherhttp://www.frankmfisher.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-80087677901774627962018-04-01T10:10:53.091-04:002018-04-01T10:10:53.091-04:00This is definitely a battle of ethics. But, I wond...This is definitely a battle of ethics. But, I wonder how this new information will affect Theusand. A great snippet! :)Jessica E. Subjecthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14356934162311768234noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-68990601192184777972018-04-01T09:43:37.873-04:002018-04-01T09:43:37.873-04:00Tense scene. These two are going to butt heads. Tw...Tense scene. These two are going to butt heads. Tweeted.Daryl Devoréhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00941826725131248565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-18137761005933038852018-04-01T08:18:32.793-04:002018-04-01T08:18:32.793-04:00intense. Great snippetintense. Great snippetFallonhttp://fallonbrownwrites.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-33593268920655085462018-04-01T01:41:53.312-04:002018-04-01T01:41:53.312-04:00From the captain's reaction, Theusand is someo...From the captain's reaction, Theusand is someone to be reckoned with. This is a good way to convey his standing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-39493406292109663182018-03-31T23:55:29.984-04:002018-03-31T23:55:29.984-04:00Sounds like a mega turf war in progress here!Sounds like a mega turf war in progress here!Botanisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.com