tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post1513005504943912896..comments2024-03-10T05:18:37.521-04:00Comments on Stories From A Starry Sky: Weekend Writing Warriors November 6, 2016Teresa Cypherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-81299485347008719462016-11-07T10:05:22.575-05:002016-11-07T10:05:22.575-05:00This makes me scared for her. Good job.This makes me scared for her. Good job.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-7676760250441864772016-11-07T02:13:08.382-05:002016-11-07T02:13:08.382-05:00The tension just keeps getting higher! Thanks for ...The tension just keeps getting higher! Thanks for sharing!Amy Braunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07333226005270392991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-77060325423045751592016-11-06T21:28:20.819-05:002016-11-06T21:28:20.819-05:00uh-huh! She seems to be a spectator now but I hope...uh-huh! She seems to be a spectator now but I hope they don't force her to fight there. Great descriptions! Rin-Rinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01768581512939794246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-75358484446151881232016-11-06T19:43:17.087-05:002016-11-06T19:43:17.087-05:00What an awful place. This is a well written scene....What an awful place. This is a well written scene.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-708884359911719392016-11-06T16:29:19.785-05:002016-11-06T16:29:19.785-05:00I wouldn't like that view either. Excellent vi...I wouldn't like that view either. Excellent visuals, great snippetNaomi Shawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16693171140434692340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-18309890847884396592016-11-06T13:53:04.891-05:002016-11-06T13:53:04.891-05:00That's a terrible sight and place to have to b...That's a terrible sight and place to have to be in! It doesn't seem like there's a quick, easy way out of this.Carrie-Annehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05810154378449825641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-14615726447706058782016-11-06T13:35:06.371-05:002016-11-06T13:35:06.371-05:00If she dies there's no story right? BUt thinks...If she dies there's no story right? BUt thinks ae looking grim. As for Nano, I'm a bit behind too. We can still make it! Elyzabeth M. VaLeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-23132850865180114372016-11-06T13:23:03.120-05:002016-11-06T13:23:03.120-05:00It sounds like they have a quantity over quality a...It sounds like they have a quantity over quality approach--and don't mind a few slaves being injured or dying. Jerks.<br /><br />Good luck on NaNo! I'm behind, too, but there's still time to catch up!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18141508426287090331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-75155956188518630072016-11-06T13:13:22.934-05:002016-11-06T13:13:22.934-05:00I'm sure her insight is correct. Of course, th...I'm sure her insight is correct. Of course, they wouldn't get good prices for damaged slaves. So, is that really what they're doing?Aurora Springerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10368905407459425208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-51590064320775082142016-11-06T12:13:09.932-05:002016-11-06T12:13:09.932-05:00I'm relieved she doesn't have to fight. Bu...I'm relieved she doesn't have to fight. But why does he want her there?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00200483339139860998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-46621753958281667412016-11-06T12:03:02.856-05:002016-11-06T12:03:02.856-05:00Ok, but that still begs the question - what was sh...Ok, but that still begs the question - what was she brought there for, if not to fight? Not a good situation!Botanisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-84884443811730518542016-11-06T11:47:59.887-05:002016-11-06T11:47:59.887-05:00Grim, but since I care about your heroine, I'l...Grim, but since I care about your heroine, I'll hang in there with her. I hope things improve in her situation! Great excerpt....very foreboding.Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-6888728713387719062016-11-06T10:55:42.685-05:002016-11-06T10:55:42.685-05:00Intense snippet. Leave you begging to kno wwhat co...Intense snippet. Leave you begging to kno wwhat comes next.Angelica Dawsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06590063222683830585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-9670344046111418492016-11-06T09:53:58.655-05:002016-11-06T09:53:58.655-05:00Such an interesting twist that he wants her to wat...Such an interesting twist that he wants her to watch, not fight--this time at least. Great description of the fighting ring, by the way.Jennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10308158251486924808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-8978634545220129062016-11-06T09:25:12.502-05:002016-11-06T09:25:12.502-05:00I hope they are not trying to frighten her to deat...I hope they are not trying to frighten her to death! Good (if scary) snippet.Rachel de Vinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13142396128885291395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-53436110513693077172016-11-06T09:17:53.505-05:002016-11-06T09:17:53.505-05:00Such amazing description! I feel sick just picturi...Such amazing description! I feel sick just picturing it. But, at least she doesn't have to fight. I fear what else they want her to do though. Great snippet!Jessica E. Subjecthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14356934162311768234noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-83601204538626452212016-11-06T08:47:02.370-05:002016-11-06T08:47:02.370-05:00You've created such a spooky and disturbing at...You've created such a spooky and disturbing atmosphere, Teresa. Probably exactly what you were going for, so kudos! :D Best of luck with NaNo! You can do it!!!Julie Evelyn Joycenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-11904076696540027922016-11-06T08:39:07.678-05:002016-11-06T08:39:07.678-05:00You paint a frightening picture, enough to cause t...You paint a frightening picture, enough to cause this reader to shudder. Demonic it recalls the Hitler years-so powerful is your writing. Now let's see our heroine get out of this mess. Please.Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-50019210129295096972016-11-06T07:42:03.897-05:002016-11-06T07:42:03.897-05:00I missed last week, so I was surprised this week t...I missed last week, so I was surprised this week to find out that she has to watch the fight. I originally feared she was going to be in ring. I'm curious to find out what she sees.Cara Bristolhttp://www.carabristol.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-29767672753587068322016-11-06T06:40:24.690-05:002016-11-06T06:40:24.690-05:00At least she's a spectator and not a participa...At least she's a spectator and not a participant! At least not yet. Holding breath at the sights she's about to see . . .Nancy Gideonhttp://nancygideon.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-12978120433830419772016-11-06T05:50:40.240-05:002016-11-06T05:50:40.240-05:00Great description. Really hoping Lily gets her cha...Great description. Really hoping Lily gets her chance to escape.Fallonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10494175654046644119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-69617779126698480912016-11-06T02:34:28.396-05:002016-11-06T02:34:28.396-05:00Great imagery. Made me cringe. I'm curious to ...Great imagery. Made me cringe. I'm curious to know why he's making her watch the fight. Karen Michelle Nutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04083893569523248900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-58527183723115770262016-11-06T02:28:10.268-05:002016-11-06T02:28:10.268-05:00Stains mottled the rusted metal with an even darke...Stains mottled the rusted metal with an even darker brown color.<br /><br />Excellent visuals, Teresa. I shuddered tooAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com