tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post1618496106838152068..comments2024-03-10T05:18:37.521-04:00Comments on Stories From A Starry Sky: Weekend Writing Warriors: October 27, 2013Teresa Cypherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comBlogger34125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-48511837661346614162013-11-02T22:58:42.028-04:002013-11-02T22:58:42.028-04:00I'd hoped the reader would be guessing, and a ...I'd hoped the reader would be guessing, and a bit intrigued. No problem on getting around, Cindy. I sort of figure that people get busy, people have problems with tech stuff, or that, Like me, people like to take all week to visit at their leisure. ;-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-16929139387647701312013-11-02T22:50:35.967-04:002013-11-02T22:50:35.967-04:00:-) Thanks for visiting, Sue Ann :-) Something un...:-) Thanks for visiting, Sue Ann :-) Something unexpected is coming, but might not be the gender. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-76461849046467399072013-10-29T14:20:11.174-04:002013-10-29T14:20:11.174-04:00Intense situations always bring family together be...Intense situations always bring family together be they good or bad. Now I wonder why the sister isn't welcome. And why she felt the dire need to be there? You left me hanging! Good for you. :)<br /><br /><a href="http://historysleuth.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">History Sleuth's Milk Carton Murders</a><br /><br />Soor so let getting around... I had to do over all my comments this week. Some reason my ipad wasn't playing well with blog comments.HistorySleuthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05502098938801373264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-16528257265641605392013-10-27T23:35:30.298-04:002013-10-27T23:35:30.298-04:00
great. I still am betting that the baby will be a...<br />great. I still am betting that the baby will be an unexpected (and unwanted) girl.Sue Ann Bowlinghttp://homecomingbook.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-88730981780694708312013-10-27T23:16:41.424-04:002013-10-27T23:16:41.424-04:00Haha! You'' just have to take a wee break ...Haha! You'' just have to take a wee break from NaNo next Sunday and read the next. Things are about to go very bad in that birthing room. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-54689421805465902462013-10-27T23:15:35.289-04:002013-10-27T23:15:35.289-04:00Thanks, Steven! That's awesome, coming from th...Thanks, Steven! That's awesome, coming from the master of details! :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-55670846515385874372013-10-27T23:15:01.167-04:002013-10-27T23:15:01.167-04:00Thanks, Millie! Awe, there you go, making me smile...Thanks, Millie! Awe, there you go, making me smile again! Thanks--it's good to be back. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-71045691761443373592013-10-27T23:14:08.159-04:002013-10-27T23:14:08.159-04:00Thanks, A.S. ! Oh my, lol, my heart is in it, but ...Thanks, A.S. ! Oh my, lol, my heart is in it, but my brain is shouting "No! You don't have the time this year!" I'm so proud of all of you who are forging ahead with it. I hope ya'll take a break for wewriwa. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-68527039256147601312013-10-27T22:38:05.088-04:002013-10-27T22:38:05.088-04:00Thank you, Linda! :-)Thank you, Linda! :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-74598327663369575072013-10-27T22:04:48.201-04:002013-10-27T22:04:48.201-04:00Thanks, Lauren. His pride is about to destroy his ...Thanks, Lauren. His pride is about to destroy his world. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-42058446718578521192013-10-27T22:04:14.432-04:002013-10-27T22:04:14.432-04:00Thanks, Debbie! And thanks for the names comment. ...Thanks, Debbie! And thanks for the names comment. I hoped that readers would associate Deamante's name with Diamond and demon. We'll see. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-78341525079252271842013-10-27T22:03:07.417-04:002013-10-27T22:03:07.417-04:00Thanks, Elyzabeth! Good insight. Crinda is tough, ...Thanks, Elyzabeth! Good insight. Crinda is tough, but she's a good person. She does hate Deamante and vice versa. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-70076028391235137492013-10-27T21:48:21.332-04:002013-10-27T21:48:21.332-04:00Thanks, Anne. :-) Thanks, Anne. :-) Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-30544079255186075292013-10-27T20:13:30.688-04:002013-10-27T20:13:30.688-04:00So well done, I can picture the scene in my head v...So well done, I can picture the scene in my head very vividly. Nice snippet. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-30800125835062485332013-10-27T19:13:38.614-04:002013-10-27T19:13:38.614-04:00Great descriptive scene. I don't know anything...Great descriptive scene. I don't know anything about her but I dislike Crinda ><Elyzabeth M. VaLeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-74990886299260188142013-10-27T18:46:49.123-04:002013-10-27T18:46:49.123-04:00Love your descriptions, from the "moon white ...Love your descriptions, from the "moon white hair" to the "lying here in the sweat and determination of a woman". Great character names too - especially Deamante. :-) Debbie D. https://www.blogger.com/profile/13153118405565035071noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-8453028838281935802013-10-27T16:40:11.956-04:002013-10-27T16:40:11.956-04:00oh man, I'm wondering if her sister is really ...oh man, I'm wondering if her sister is really going to help. I hope so, the poor guy needs his mate to be okay! great job!Laurenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07986129906420811246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-8895048615158929552013-10-27T16:35:21.579-04:002013-10-27T16:35:21.579-04:00Thanks, Frank. She is of more assistance, and havi...Thanks, Frank. She is of more assistance, and having the moxie to dare anger Deamante is critical to this scene. :-) .Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-29054069075429473162013-10-27T16:27:53.249-04:002013-10-27T16:27:53.249-04:00Thanks, Veronica. The older sister is a life saver...Thanks, Veronica. The older sister is a life saver--and not just figuratively. :-)<br />Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-47402065139804482162013-10-27T16:27:05.030-04:002013-10-27T16:27:05.030-04:00Awe, thanks for the welcome back! The healer is ru...Awe, thanks for the welcome back! The healer is running scared of the ruler. He's shown a propensity toward a lack of feelings. Things are about to get a whole lot worse. :-) Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-71843598271882273112013-10-27T16:25:14.522-04:002013-10-27T16:25:14.522-04:00Thanks, Rose. This opening chapter is a little dec...Thanks, Rose. This opening chapter is a little deceptive, at first. What happens changes things for the ruler. Changes things for everyone. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-31300839587591883672013-10-27T15:44:11.637-04:002013-10-27T15:44:11.637-04:00Great description, so vivid. I love (yet don't...Great description, so vivid. I love (yet don't entirely trust) Crinda's remark about her lying in the "sweat and determination of a woman". Nice!!Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11457235963917206588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-37421902535821006882013-10-27T14:45:44.222-04:002013-10-27T14:45:44.222-04:00Missed you, our fearless leader. And now the birth...Missed you, our fearless leader. And now the birthing scene with all the conflict. I say get rid of the healer , let the older sister remind her to push and Deamante beware. Men don't belong in the room.Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-55992852910546411422013-10-27T14:33:59.875-04:002013-10-27T14:33:59.875-04:00I think I'm glad the sister is there? Very ten...I think I'm glad the sister is there? Very tense situation, just got way more complicated - excellent excerpt!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-19698092100565806722013-10-27T13:55:04.228-04:002013-10-27T13:55:04.228-04:00Liked the "moon white hair" to go with p...Liked the "moon white hair" to go with pale blue eyes.<br />With the healer wringing his hands, let's hope that Crinda can be of more assistance.<br />Well done!FCEtierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14199098303138353894noreply@blogger.com