tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post2123191830108410655..comments2024-03-10T05:18:37.521-04:00Comments on Stories From A Starry Sky: Weekend Writing Warriors April 22, 2018Teresa Cypherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-7069028647911142822018-04-23T20:12:28.771-04:002018-04-23T20:12:28.771-04:00Oh, wow. I would not want to be her.Oh, wow. I would not want to be her.Christiane France - Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05917176687544964756noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-71307289512254737122018-04-22T22:21:11.678-04:002018-04-22T22:21:11.678-04:00Nice guy (not).Nice guy (not).Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-80523735600253313602018-04-22T20:16:05.136-04:002018-04-22T20:16:05.136-04:00Oh no, what a tragic backstory! :'(Oh no, what a tragic backstory! :'( Amy Braunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07333226005270392991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-8752014345467535872018-04-22T19:57:01.319-04:002018-04-22T19:57:01.319-04:00What an awful experience! Poor girl, I hope Dev Av...What an awful experience! Poor girl, I hope Dev Avreen doesn't get her back!Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-34667779534651601582018-04-22T19:41:05.640-04:002018-04-22T19:41:05.640-04:00Intense! I wonder if anyone will be punished becau...Intense! I wonder if anyone will be punished because of her treatment.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-18552633995656873852018-04-22T18:51:26.905-04:002018-04-22T18:51:26.905-04:00Emotional, traumatic and totally intense. Great jo...Emotional, traumatic and totally intense. Great job, Teresa!!Nancy Gideonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07493107610530282642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-40023438199371070492018-04-22T16:13:31.596-04:002018-04-22T16:13:31.596-04:00She's blurting out everything, hopefully with ...She's blurting out everything, hopefully with the correct mental inflection!Aurora Springerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10368905407459425208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-50366250959098207512018-04-22T16:06:32.089-04:002018-04-22T16:06:32.089-04:00I feel so much for her in this snippet. She's ...I feel so much for her in this snippet. She's so brave to share her story and I hope they treat her kindly for opening up about it. Great work! Julie Evelyn Joycenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-3060449081178979992018-04-22T14:40:35.418-04:002018-04-22T14:40:35.418-04:00Poor girl. I hope she finds her audience sympathet...Poor girl. I hope she finds her audience sympathetic and not willing to return her to the slavers. Good job.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-13417860259607840832018-04-22T12:51:54.491-04:002018-04-22T12:51:54.491-04:00I like how described her struggle to focus- that w...I like how described her struggle to focus- that would be difficult with people poking around in your head.Alexis Duranhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15582838606796213690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-5335612586054560932018-04-22T11:28:49.488-04:002018-04-22T11:28:49.488-04:00Hmmm, this sounds bad to us, but if their culture ...Hmmm, this sounds bad to us, but if their culture accepts slavery then the treatment Lily's describing so far might be nothing more than par for the course and regarded as unremarkable. Or do they have an ingrained culture of treating slaves well? There needs to be something that would be clearly out of line even to the captain of a slave ship. Wonder what that else Lily is going to describe?Botanisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-35271904086774815802018-04-22T10:19:05.395-04:002018-04-22T10:19:05.395-04:00Wow. A lot of emotion in this snippet. It makes me...Wow. A lot of emotion in this snippet. It makes me want to read more!Alexandra Christlehttp://www.alexandrachristle.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-79752481913887470762018-04-22T09:54:39.857-04:002018-04-22T09:54:39.857-04:00I hope her audience for this statement will treat ...I hope her audience for this statement will treat her well, not just hand her back over. Such a fascinating story! I'm on the edge of my chair for sure.Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-39122407558381262562018-04-22T08:30:24.275-04:002018-04-22T08:30:24.275-04:00Oh, I hope this works so she won't be forced t...Oh, I hope this works so she won't be forced to go back with him. Theusand seemed so bad at first, but now he's trying so hard to help her. Great snippet!Jessica E. Subjecthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14356934162311768234noreply@blogger.com