tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post3053782081936499885..comments2024-03-10T05:18:37.521-04:00Comments on Stories From A Starry Sky: Six Sentence Sunday: December 2, 2012Teresa Cypherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-67637577556121618862012-12-12T14:32:11.835-05:002012-12-12T14:32:11.835-05:00Teresa, I have a question to ask you and don't...Teresa, I have a question to ask you and don't have a private email for you. Could you contact me off list? <br /><br />mariehallwrites@gmail.com :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09899243599516908136noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-62393840609447850412012-12-09T18:32:11.479-05:002012-12-09T18:32:11.479-05:00Road map of stars is lovely imagery- see the hyphe...Road map of stars is lovely imagery- see the hyphen/not hyphen has already been spotted! Hoping love wins :-) Lisa Southardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09711376747848601409noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-79701149539928347812012-12-09T11:16:47.053-05:002012-12-09T11:16:47.053-05:00Details are my thing :DDetails are my thing :DOwlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-46374641411873830422012-12-04T15:43:16.050-05:002012-12-04T15:43:16.050-05:00You really know how to draw a picture with words. ...You really know how to draw a picture with words. He is a strong and complex character. DasNukhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06513945470399592454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-76407129606567831682012-12-03T11:35:05.352-05:002012-12-03T11:35:05.352-05:00Poor soul, torn between his faith and his love.Poor soul, torn between his faith and his love.Pippa Jayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15146591827060731958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-31545369692909569432012-12-02T17:40:11.570-05:002012-12-02T17:40:11.570-05:00Dream sequence? Whose dream?Dream sequence? Whose dream?Sue Ann Bowlinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17692320238497263942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-20127807499992043682012-12-02T15:23:01.692-05:002012-12-02T15:23:01.692-05:00Yikes, looks like he's got quite the dilemma! ...Yikes, looks like he's got quite the dilemma! Great 6!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-82493488209128238222012-12-02T15:05:37.627-05:002012-12-02T15:05:37.627-05:00Wow, Teresa! There is a lot of conflict and stake...Wow, Teresa! There is a lot of conflict and stakes in this! Great six! patonlorrainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04312527117343841653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-17734498560949464512012-12-02T14:02:23.811-05:002012-12-02T14:02:23.811-05:00This is wonderful, Teresa. The inner and external ...This is wonderful, Teresa. The inner and external conflict, the use of religion, the stars as roadmap -- all wonderful. I can't wait to read this book!Monica Enderle Piercehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08906580310155422359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-71023833928086305132012-12-02T13:55:09.872-05:002012-12-02T13:55:09.872-05:00Simply delicious. Always is with your excerpts. Lo...Simply delicious. Always is with your excerpts. Love your lyrical style Teresa! ;)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09899243599516908136noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-36457318609756469472012-12-02T13:22:30.691-05:002012-12-02T13:22:30.691-05:00It's great that he is so sure of his previous ...It's great that he is so sure of his previous actions despite what others may believe. :)Jessica E. Subjecthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14356934162311768234noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-67600219380174730642012-12-02T13:08:10.503-05:002012-12-02T13:08:10.503-05:00Thanks Owly! You are sharp, girl! Nothing gets p...Thanks Owly! You are sharp, girl! Nothing gets past you. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-41027420943604082362012-12-02T13:07:16.329-05:002012-12-02T13:07:16.329-05:00Thanks, Jess! On my way over to see how Grace is d...Thanks, Jess! On my way over to see how Grace is doing. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-32599133170244971342012-12-02T13:06:49.580-05:002012-12-02T13:06:49.580-05:00Thanks for your kind words, Silver! :-) And thank...Thanks for your kind words, Silver! :-) And thank you for visiting.Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-24813360237137833672012-12-02T12:06:04.312-05:002012-12-02T12:06:04.312-05:00I really like that he's having a serious strug...I really like that he's having a serious struggle. It's not just one issue. He sounds like somebody she could really appreciate if he decides to commit to her. Nice excerpt.<br /><br />(only other comment is that you use "roadmap" as one word and then use it with a hyphen, but that's minor)Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-12573116857722035512012-12-02T11:27:38.457-05:002012-12-02T11:27:38.457-05:00Teresa, this is a lovely snippet. The sentences fl...Teresa, this is a lovely snippet. The sentences flow together. Well done!Jess Schirahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04930756756945812094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-88454927591596991442012-12-02T11:04:39.148-05:002012-12-02T11:04:39.148-05:00I LOVE the imagery of the road map of stars. And w...I LOVE the imagery of the road map of stars. And what a dilemma but that's going to make a great story. Well done!Silver Jameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15606837105470988646noreply@blogger.com