tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post4768642964999340617..comments2024-03-10T05:18:37.521-04:00Comments on Stories From A Starry Sky: Six Sentence Sunday January 13, 2013Teresa Cypherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-65578610526119783142013-01-19T14:28:02.582-05:002013-01-19T14:28:02.582-05:00Cool. Thanks, Deb! It was my pleasure visiting yo...Cool. Thanks, Deb! It was my pleasure visiting your blog. Nice blog, btw.I hope you do join in. 6SS is about to become defunct, but something is on the horizon. :-) I'll let you know. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-11501578829965313312013-01-19T14:24:37.451-05:002013-01-19T14:24:37.451-05:00Awe, thanks, Sally! It is the first novel I wrote...Awe, thanks, Sally! It is the first novel I wrote, currently editing it. More of a major overhaul. I'll get there. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-62980465777761909212013-01-19T14:23:16.589-05:002013-01-19T14:23:16.589-05:00Oh, Dearie! lol, my hat won't fit! I experimen...Oh, Dearie! lol, my hat won't fit! I experimented a bit--longer sentences than I'd have typically used in an action scene, but with more powerful verbs. It seems to have worked for you! Woot! :-) Thank you.<br />A big hug to you!Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-69104095125155740152013-01-19T14:20:40.353-05:002013-01-19T14:20:40.353-05:00Thanks SE! I'm glad it had you wondering! :-)Thanks SE! I'm glad it had you wondering! :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-14676551529949253952013-01-19T14:20:06.960-05:002013-01-19T14:20:06.960-05:00The holidays can be so hard, ML. I do hope you vis...The holidays can be so hard, ML. I do hope you visit from time to time--and I will keep checking on you. We writers are a different lot. So solitary, yet so concerned about the well-being of each other. :-) A big hug to you. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-41317142493481940272013-01-19T01:33:19.194-05:002013-01-19T01:33:19.194-05:00Hi Teresa; Well, this is a gripping tale! Would ...Hi Teresa; Well, this is a gripping tale! Would love to read more. Great Idea for a blog hop. May join in, soon. Thanks for visiting my new blog site, as well.<br />Have a great weekend.<br />Cheers!Debbie D. https://www.blogger.com/profile/13153118405565035071noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-56395052623471206852013-01-16T23:39:03.647-05:002013-01-16T23:39:03.647-05:00Hi Teresa,
You are a very good writer! You really...Hi Teresa,<br />You are a very good writer! You really had me hooked! Is this an ongoing story? Sallysally brownhttp://www.speakingoflove.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-70212963060195912152013-01-14T07:31:27.244-05:002013-01-14T07:31:27.244-05:00The image, the pacing, everything works so well in...The image, the pacing, everything works so well in this sequence. And while I'm dissecting I notice that you don't use that many adjectives, but loads of strong verbs. That's how it's done. You're awesome. :)DasNukhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06513945470399592454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-14685472600383659022013-01-14T04:24:02.692-05:002013-01-14T04:24:02.692-05:00A great action packed scene and very well describe...A great action packed scene and very well described. Left me hoping and wondering whether she will escape.S E Gilchristhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00763129689198803248noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-29272175827592486692013-01-13T23:33:06.334-05:002013-01-13T23:33:06.334-05:00Hi Teresa, it's great to hear from you. I'...Hi Teresa, it's great to hear from you. I'm doing ok, thank you. How are you doing? your writing going well?<br /><br />Great Six! She's a tough girl, I look forward to learning more of her character. <br /><br />I have been distant for some time. The holidays are so difficult for me, and so I revert into my hermit ways. I'm glad to hear from you as your note reminds me of how long I've been gone, dwelling deep in the dark place I go when the hermititus strikes. <br /><br />The end of Six Sentence Sundays is a grievous thing as well. I keep telling myself I need to participate in the final few then my days blur together till Sunday comes and it's too late to participate. I have to at least climb back to renew my posts on my blog here. <br /><br />Thank you for checking in on me. It means the world. M.L. Falconerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14118491465472334192noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-81862704895679799062013-01-13T21:41:56.241-05:002013-01-13T21:41:56.241-05:00Thanks, Jessica! :-) Hmm...might be Cuylrh, might ...Thanks, Jessica! :-) Hmm...might be Cuylrh, might be his grandfather. ;-)<br />Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-48867924312275629492013-01-13T21:41:02.220-05:002013-01-13T21:41:02.220-05:00Thanks, Anastasia. :-) I'm glad you thought so...Thanks, Anastasia. :-) I'm glad you thought so. ;-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-35755433507217280702013-01-13T21:40:37.798-05:002013-01-13T21:40:37.798-05:00Thanks, Steven! You know action... :-)Thanks, Steven! You know action... :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-27268845188741604112013-01-13T21:40:16.617-05:002013-01-13T21:40:16.617-05:00Thanks, Taryn :-)Thanks, Taryn :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-86796113553129862752013-01-13T21:40:04.048-05:002013-01-13T21:40:04.048-05:00Thanks, Sue Ann. It's good to read that it was...Thanks, Sue Ann. It's good to read that it was perceived as a very believable snippet. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-1636229349716947672013-01-13T21:39:18.894-05:002013-01-13T21:39:18.894-05:00Thanks, Lorraine. ~sigh~ We are running out of Sun...Thanks, Lorraine. ~sigh~ We are running out of Sundays. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-66292643068579143802013-01-13T21:38:48.499-05:002013-01-13T21:38:48.499-05:00Thanks for all your kind words,Cindy! :-)
Thanks for all your kind words,Cindy! :-)<br />Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-51610466591796972652013-01-13T21:38:00.207-05:002013-01-13T21:38:00.207-05:00Thanks, Kate! Ha! She does have to win, but she ha...Thanks, Kate! Ha! She does have to win, but she has a lot of losses along the way. :-) Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-46080721428470861952013-01-13T21:18:03.386-05:002013-01-13T21:18:03.386-05:00But...but...she has to win. Ok, she can lose temp...But...but...she has to win. Ok, she can lose temporarily, but she better win overall. Nicely done. The chaos is evoked well.Kate Warrenhttp://www.thekatewarren.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-2202509273044231842013-01-13T19:29:08.251-05:002013-01-13T19:29:08.251-05:00Oh - very exciting and intriguing! Love the fight...Oh - very exciting and intriguing! Love the fight and the betting. Can't wait to see what is going to happen next. patonlorrainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04312527117343841653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-43957659887848416862013-01-13T16:09:59.306-05:002013-01-13T16:09:59.306-05:00I love her spirit. She's definitely feisty. Lo...I love her spirit. She's definitely feisty. Loved the action. I'm with Sue Ann. I liked the betting in the background. That was a nice touch.Cindy Carrollhttp://www.cindycarroll.com/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-91971860323118644972013-01-13T13:35:19.885-05:002013-01-13T13:35:19.885-05:00The betting activity in the background is so true ...The betting activity in the background is so true to life.Sue Ann Bowlinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17692320238497263942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-28321914668799378832013-01-13T13:12:29.170-05:002013-01-13T13:12:29.170-05:00Action-packed snippet.Action-packed snippet.Taryn Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11130206764352777367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-59846367052085755422013-01-13T11:42:05.682-05:002013-01-13T11:42:05.682-05:00Nicely constructed action scene -- great stuff!Nicely constructed action scene -- great stuff!Daezarkian13https://www.blogger.com/profile/08839083029518977312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-202526400380915782013-01-13T10:19:22.462-05:002013-01-13T10:19:22.462-05:00Oh, this is tense!Oh, this is tense!Anastasia Vitskyhttp://governingana.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.com