tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post4918635156300220608..comments2024-03-10T05:18:37.521-04:00Comments on Stories From A Starry Sky: Weekend Writing Warriors: February 2, 2014Teresa Cypherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comBlogger48125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-14156985602894501912014-02-06T21:37:29.920-05:002014-02-06T21:37:29.920-05:00Thanks,Karen :-) !Thanks,Karen :-) !Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-24847600340137456872014-02-05T11:00:35.048-05:002014-02-05T11:00:35.048-05:00I agree. Definitely run! Great tension and suspens...I agree. Definitely run! Great tension and suspense in your 8!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08920349957061612653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-59006768194265310772014-02-03T20:06:21.231-05:002014-02-03T20:06:21.231-05:00Maybe "older and wiser sister voice"? ...Maybe "older and wiser sister voice"? Thank you Sue. It's so helpful to know at this early stage when something doesn't work for a reader--and why. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-19483491965684379232014-02-03T17:14:46.848-05:002014-02-03T17:14:46.848-05:00It's a good scene. But "big sister's ...It's a good scene. But "big sister's voice" jarred me. this is a fantasy yes? and has an old world or other worldly feeling. The phrase appears too contemporary, so I feltsuehttp://sassyspeaks.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-20833387308485949212014-02-02T23:14:39.203-05:002014-02-02T23:14:39.203-05:00Me too, Carrie Anne. Thanks for visiting :-)Me too, Carrie Anne. Thanks for visiting :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-56895846986085609992014-02-02T21:43:00.874-05:002014-02-02T21:43:00.874-05:00I would go too, unless there's reason to suspe...I would go too, unless there's reason to suspect a trap may be waiting for them, or their path out could be blocked.Carrie-Annehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05810154378449825641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-18496311513650412552014-02-02T21:41:51.947-05:002014-02-02T21:41:51.947-05:00Yeppers. Thanks, Millie! :-)Yeppers. Thanks, Millie! :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-62572687122776036952014-02-02T21:41:30.282-05:002014-02-02T21:41:30.282-05:00Oh, Chelle, it takes a whole book for him to see t...Oh, Chelle, it takes a whole book for him to see the error of his ways. Thanks for visiting. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-10060575101640301412014-02-02T21:40:51.790-05:002014-02-02T21:40:51.790-05:00Thanks, Cindy. Tension is about done. :-)Thanks, Cindy. Tension is about done. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-89866532573511691672014-02-02T21:40:25.404-05:002014-02-02T21:40:25.404-05:00Thanks, Dani! ;-)Thanks, Dani! ;-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-18545744192568237432014-02-02T21:39:55.861-05:002014-02-02T21:39:55.861-05:00Yes, quite capable. Thanks, Elyzabeth! ;-)Yes, quite capable. Thanks, Elyzabeth! ;-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-87956771956549616422014-02-02T21:39:20.172-05:002014-02-02T21:39:20.172-05:00She does. She's a sooth as well. She knows thi...She does. She's a sooth as well. She knows things she's not saying. Thanks for visiting, Sarah. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-3585020910974081272014-02-02T21:27:48.538-05:002014-02-02T21:27:48.538-05:00Yes she did, Sue Ann. Flight isn't really an o...Yes she did, Sue Ann. Flight isn't really an option for her. <br /><br />My grandmother used to tell a story about getting out of bed after one of her kids was born (1910-1925 she gave birth) and fixing breakfast for her husband and then taking care of his bedridden parents. She was one tough lady. Most women aren't made that way. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-39075846583048204622014-02-02T21:24:28.687-05:002014-02-02T21:24:28.687-05:00Yeah, fleeing now--it's a problem for Rella. T...Yeah, fleeing now--it's a problem for Rella. Thanks, J Rose :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-9238211341857670902014-02-02T21:23:33.995-05:002014-02-02T21:23:33.995-05:00Ugh, tags and beats get me too often! Thanks, Siob...Ugh, tags and beats get me too often! Thanks, Siobhan--awesome editor you are. ;-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-17082397328973048642014-02-02T21:23:19.172-05:002014-02-02T21:23:19.172-05:00I don't think there's any doubt he'll ...I don't think there's any doubt he'll kill them both. They need to get the heck outta dodge! Yikes! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05551671528722336812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-66375845011251094392014-02-02T21:22:53.635-05:002014-02-02T21:22:53.635-05:00Thanks, A.S. :-)Thanks, A.S. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-27361047100456760772014-02-02T21:22:34.168-05:002014-02-02T21:22:34.168-05:00Not safe at all. Thanks, Dana! :-)Not safe at all. Thanks, Dana! :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-67048140125533151362014-02-02T21:22:12.092-05:002014-02-02T21:22:12.092-05:00Thanks, Jess ;-)Thanks, Jess ;-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-60723031768298075982014-02-02T21:21:53.804-05:002014-02-02T21:21:53.804-05:00Thanks, Veronica! :-)Thanks, Veronica! :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-48390516429102909272014-02-02T21:21:32.821-05:002014-02-02T21:21:32.821-05:00Thanks, Alexis! :-)Thanks, Alexis! :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-83194839673997871622014-02-02T21:19:40.761-05:002014-02-02T21:19:40.761-05:00Thanks, Marcia! Yep, right from this spot next wee...Thanks, Marcia! Yep, right from this spot next week. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-16062654945044277152014-02-02T21:19:06.545-05:002014-02-02T21:19:06.545-05:00Ha! All in due time, Charmaine! lol This has been...Ha! All in due time, Charmaine! lol This has been the first chapter, and I'll be finished with it in the next couple of weeks. :-) Thank you so much for all of your encouragement. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-33301493669735459852014-02-02T21:17:37.975-05:002014-02-02T21:17:37.975-05:00Thanks, Eleri! I really hope to release it this ye...Thanks, Eleri! I really hope to release it this year. ~sigh~ If I were more organized. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-50332745218571050642014-02-02T21:16:18.409-05:002014-02-02T21:16:18.409-05:00Neat--glad you liked that little touch! :-) Thanks...Neat--glad you liked that little touch! :-) Thanks, Gemma :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.com