tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post5844347400506646113..comments2024-03-10T05:18:37.521-04:00Comments on Stories From A Starry Sky: Weekend Writing Warriors March 25, 2018Teresa Cypherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-27700928268046502502018-03-30T08:04:42.313-04:002018-03-30T08:04:42.313-04:00Ooo, the tension's so thick. Loving Theusand&#...Ooo, the tension's so thick. Loving Theusand's response, but I think it's going to take more than a little talking.Aldrea Alienhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05652344290376563676noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-64618105194307422232018-03-26T23:16:32.043-04:002018-03-26T23:16:32.043-04:00That Theusand sounds like one nasty character.That Theusand sounds like one nasty character.Christiane France - Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05917176687544964756noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-80805545533688260922018-03-26T08:11:51.234-04:002018-03-26T08:11:51.234-04:00Suspicious time for them to disappear and these tw...Suspicious time for them to disappear and these two are "not happy" with each other - things are going to get interesting.<br />Tweeted.Daryl Devoréhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00941826725131248565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-59360434376357830822018-03-26T00:30:38.638-04:002018-03-26T00:30:38.638-04:00So Theusand isn't all powerful. Great snippet....So Theusand isn't all powerful. Great snippet. Makes me want to know more. Karen Michelle Nutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04083893569523248900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-42523857654803566212018-03-26T00:22:26.211-04:002018-03-26T00:22:26.211-04:00He doesn't seem to be winning this argument. H...He doesn't seem to be winning this argument. Hopefully this doesn't end with her back in slavery! o.OAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18141508426287090331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-29212932099028865252018-03-26T00:02:19.247-04:002018-03-26T00:02:19.247-04:00This has all the makings of a knock down, drag out...This has all the makings of a knock down, drag out fight just waiting to happen. I cannot wait to see what Theusand does to save Lily this time. I mean, he has to, right?Jennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10308158251486924808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-84850425363128346762018-03-25T22:03:46.838-04:002018-03-25T22:03:46.838-04:00Great tension. The conflict between Dev and Theusa...Great tension. The conflict between Dev and Theusand is coming to a head. Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-26434373255321759842018-03-25T20:02:42.174-04:002018-03-25T20:02:42.174-04:00Oh, I hope Theusand can talk his way out of this o...Oh, I hope Theusand can talk his way out of this one, what a tense situation!Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-38101105994338772952018-03-25T18:29:23.679-04:002018-03-25T18:29:23.679-04:00My stomach plunged at that last line. Great snippe...My stomach plunged at that last line. Great snippet!Libby Campbellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00730858605854157221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-37051815975339116042018-03-25T17:32:47.231-04:002018-03-25T17:32:47.231-04:00Does he not see Lily standing there? Or do all hum...Does he not see Lily standing there? Or do all humans look alike to him? Great tension in this scene.Alexis Duranhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15582838606796213690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-2749749875715103162018-03-25T14:38:48.117-04:002018-03-25T14:38:48.117-04:00Uh oh, menacing music on the soundtrack...interest...Uh oh, menacing music on the soundtrack...interesting that Theusand seems uneasy. I thought he was all powerful. Really makes me wonder what will happen next, so kudos for a well done snippet!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-67258768072934971652018-03-25T13:46:37.924-04:002018-03-25T13:46:37.924-04:00LOL. Even in science fiction, lawyers have the fin...LOL. Even in science fiction, lawyers have the final say.<br />And yes, if you'd add me to the linky list, I'd appreciate it very much!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-46972549252963175942018-03-25T13:45:54.840-04:002018-03-25T13:45:54.840-04:00These darn external conflicts.... nice snippetThese darn external conflicts.... nice snippetSue Barrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06347249118943488564noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-27257278995129523082018-03-25T12:19:17.150-04:002018-03-25T12:19:17.150-04:00Sounds like Theusand may not be in a strong enough...Sounds like Theusand may not be in a strong enough position to keep Lily from harm! Very precarious positionBotanisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-65931693535538810852018-03-25T12:06:16.050-04:002018-03-25T12:06:16.050-04:00This looks bad for Lily. This looks bad for Lily. Aurora Springerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10368905407459425208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-16074708386632922642018-03-25T12:04:52.708-04:002018-03-25T12:04:52.708-04:00Ugh, this guy isn’t backing off. Hopefully Theusan...Ugh, this guy isn’t backing off. Hopefully Theusand continues to stand up to him!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00200483339139860998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-11069146675817273112018-03-25T11:47:00.079-04:002018-03-25T11:47:00.079-04:00Oooo I wanna know what happens next! Oooo I wanna know what happens next! Amy Braunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07333226005270392991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-43476026044429450662018-03-25T09:11:14.875-04:002018-03-25T09:11:14.875-04:00Oh, the tension is rising, and poor Lily is stuck ...Oh, the tension is rising, and poor Lily is stuck in the middle. A fabulous snippet! :)Jessica E. Subjecthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14356934162311768234noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-60133227525846354862018-03-25T05:19:33.258-04:002018-03-25T05:19:33.258-04:00I like Theusand's response.I like Theusand's response. Fallonhttp://fallonbrownwrites.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com