tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post6890916522425933660..comments2024-03-10T05:18:37.521-04:00Comments on Stories From A Starry Sky: Weekend Writing Warriors October 11, 2015Teresa Cypherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comBlogger58125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-58281093843921504652015-10-18T02:56:37.592-04:002015-10-18T02:56:37.592-04:00Thanks, Cecilia :-)Thanks, Cecilia :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-67576314564376501322015-10-17T21:59:45.721-04:002015-10-17T21:59:45.721-04:00Love the snippet. Very detailed!Love the snippet. Very detailed!Ceciliahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07076648307785084672noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-66701080364995902562015-10-17T16:08:09.371-04:002015-10-17T16:08:09.371-04:00Thanks, Elyzabeth, and me too! We still joke that ...Thanks, Elyzabeth, and me too! We still joke that there was something evil hiding in the mist on top of that mountain--and it's still calling us back! :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-36824722060866663012015-10-17T16:07:00.022-04:002015-10-17T16:07:00.022-04:00Thanks, Carri-Anne!Thanks, Carri-Anne!Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-27822765938774944612015-10-16T18:24:59.233-04:002015-10-16T18:24:59.233-04:00Great inner monologue and I love how you give us a...Great inner monologue and I love how you give us an idea of how to pronounce his name. Great pictures! Glad you found your way back ;-) Elyzabeth M. VaLeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-4250647950687611512015-10-16T01:39:30.053-04:002015-10-16T01:39:30.053-04:00I love her inner monologue, and the line about the...I love her inner monologue, and the line about the mind meandering.Carrie-Annehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05810154378449825641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-24293966008424765452015-10-15T20:44:26.641-04:002015-10-15T20:44:26.641-04:00Haha! I know you're not a bad person, Shan. SO...Haha! I know you're not a bad person, Shan. SO that just tickles me that you're an engaged reader!<br /><br />Thanks for visiting, and for your kind words. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-26425074873966086562015-10-14T19:11:37.057-04:002015-10-14T19:11:37.057-04:00I'm thinking she'd be better off worrying ...I'm thinking she'd be better off worrying about whatever the thing was with that blue scarf...<br /><br />But she really doesn't have all the information I have, and she's living a moment I'm not. I guess I can understand the way her poor mind is leaping around in something of a panic...<br /><br />I'm eager to see it all falling apart - does that make me a bad person, or an engaged reader/ =)Shan Jeniah Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01757607146774769663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-81185828060087755172015-10-13T19:15:51.604-04:002015-10-13T19:15:51.604-04:00Haha! Yeppers. She's about to figure it out. :...Haha! Yeppers. She's about to figure it out. :-) Thanks, Siobhan. Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-9893064609077878432015-10-13T19:15:20.743-04:002015-10-13T19:15:20.743-04:00Thanks, Veronica. Tweaked it. :-) I love my wewriw...Thanks, Veronica. Tweaked it. :-) I love my wewriwa crowd-sourcing crits. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-87128872084004030222015-10-13T19:14:41.021-04:002015-10-13T19:14:41.021-04:00Thanks, Aurora! :-)Thanks, Aurora! :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-74484759947971920082015-10-13T19:14:20.707-04:002015-10-13T19:14:20.707-04:00Thanks, Karen! :-)Thanks, Karen! :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-83938846796409820542015-10-13T19:13:22.426-04:002015-10-13T19:13:22.426-04:00She has no idea, and with the language barrier, it...She has no idea, and with the language barrier, it's going to take her a while. Tragic things will happen over it. Thanks, Charmaine!Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-48688193736196703852015-10-13T19:12:33.917-04:002015-10-13T19:12:33.917-04:00Thanks :-) lol!Thanks :-) lol!Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-48557461427802669432015-10-12T22:29:32.285-04:002015-10-12T22:29:32.285-04:00love the "creative punctuation alert". ...love the "creative punctuation alert". The opening line is a great opening line! The bit about the mind meandering - aw heck - the whole thing was great.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00859109777005545304noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-5399181597181105362015-10-12T22:27:13.548-04:002015-10-12T22:27:13.548-04:00Yeah...she lucky for that. He has his bad side too...Yeah...she lucky for that. He has his bad side too. :-) Thanks for visiting, Lorien. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-92156609857995918902015-10-12T22:26:20.195-04:002015-10-12T22:26:20.195-04:00Yep. She's pretty much numb at this point. One...Yep. She's pretty much numb at this point. One more bout with the predators, and then something has to give. :-) Thanks for visiting, Caitlin. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-78439088212816893282015-10-12T22:25:22.253-04:002015-10-12T22:25:22.253-04:00Yeah, and then things start snapping. Thanks, Elai...Yeah, and then things start snapping. Thanks, Elaine!Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-73222061815523995032015-10-12T22:24:53.071-04:002015-10-12T22:24:53.071-04:00Haha! Yeppers. :-) Thanks for visiting, Jeff!Haha! Yeppers. :-) Thanks for visiting, Jeff!Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-5434092530146955802015-10-12T22:24:25.935-04:002015-10-12T22:24:25.935-04:00It's coming up pretty fast! :-) Thanks for vis...It's coming up pretty fast! :-) Thanks for visiting, Dianne. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-18374844488148380372015-10-12T22:23:58.090-04:002015-10-12T22:23:58.090-04:00:-) I think she'll get it figured out here, re...:-) I think she'll get it figured out here, real soon. ;-) Thanks for visiting, Iris.Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-16038001104314013232015-10-12T21:53:42.971-04:002015-10-12T21:53:42.971-04:00It really was, Ian. Laughter just feels so good. T...It really was, Ian. Laughter just feels so good. The older I get,. the more I crave it. :-) Thanks for visiting. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-22682990020176813622015-10-12T21:53:07.257-04:002015-10-12T21:53:07.257-04:00Thanks, Millie! :-)Thanks, Millie! :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-64063129349308868112015-10-12T21:52:39.172-04:002015-10-12T21:52:39.172-04:00:-) Thanks, Alexis. :-) Thanks, Alexis. Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-88476989472159084442015-10-12T21:27:13.674-04:002015-10-12T21:27:13.674-04:00lol--I'm not good at placing them either. ;-)
...lol--I'm not good at placing them either. ;-)<br /><br />I like Cara's idea. Here my boggle: He doesn't speak Earth English. He speaks no Earth language at all. This is still pretty early in the story, and I'm leery of asking a reader to accept an alien language at this point. In the entire book, there might be ten to fifteen alien words introduced. :-)<br /><br />Thanks for your crit, Marcia. I do appreciate them. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.com