tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post7629729940323588404..comments2024-03-10T05:18:37.521-04:00Comments on Stories From A Starry Sky: Weekend Writing Warriors: May 10, 2015Teresa Cypherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-24373924708163350472015-05-13T23:06:15.403-04:002015-05-13T23:06:15.403-04:00That's a pretty frightening situation. I hope...That's a pretty frightening situation. I hope they're able to get there in time for a successful rescue.Carrie-Annehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05810154378449825641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-84870316843875806852015-05-13T09:28:36.487-04:002015-05-13T09:28:36.487-04:00tense scene. you can feel his dreadtense scene. you can feel his dreadAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13164269285285491186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-30893457736054251122015-05-11T09:29:20.577-04:002015-05-11T09:29:20.577-04:00Hi, Teresa. I don't know the story here yet, ...Hi, Teresa. I don't know the story here yet, but ... tension, oh, there is definitely tension.<br /><br />The only thing that confused me were the quotes on the outside of the snippet. Perhaps that's something with how Blogger shows a blockquote (been a long time since I used my Blogger blog)... Anyway, it made me think this was being told to someone after the fact, which numbed the tension some... as in "we already know the ending"Eden "Kymele" Mabeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01550337993392791643noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-51871371858042839742015-05-10T21:23:54.742-04:002015-05-10T21:23:54.742-04:00Well done, a very intense scene.Well done, a very intense scene.Chelle Corderohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15412268726863698528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-70978340040868138562015-05-10T18:24:58.127-04:002015-05-10T18:24:58.127-04:00The tension is escalating. Well done.The tension is escalating. Well done.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-62575194370038985262015-05-10T17:36:17.826-04:002015-05-10T17:36:17.826-04:00Ah, the fun of pretending you're not panicking...Ah, the fun of pretending you're not panicking, when everyone knows you are! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-35955585918725406722015-05-10T15:36:11.788-04:002015-05-10T15:36:11.788-04:00I've missed Abraxum and here he is. Wonderful ...I've missed Abraxum and here he is. Wonderful snippet with urgency and the prayer tops it all. Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-11771011138618216362015-05-10T15:22:04.652-04:002015-05-10T15:22:04.652-04:00Wonderful build up of tension! I can feel the fear...Wonderful build up of tension! I can feel the fear.gemma parkeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06275261646534324484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-75061411970967072452015-05-10T14:19:26.840-04:002015-05-10T14:19:26.840-04:00So great that you're showing both sides, Teres...So great that you're showing both sides, Teresa! Their desperation really tightens the tension. :)Sarah Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13265589529909793312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-89096127382322979012015-05-10T13:08:40.090-04:002015-05-10T13:08:40.090-04:00Oh cool, for some reason I thought he was already ...Oh cool, for some reason I thought he was already beyond any hep from his men so this is good. Excellent excerpt!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-16828341544703200962015-05-10T12:17:22.771-04:002015-05-10T12:17:22.771-04:00Action and a question. Who? Action and a question. Who? Aurora Springerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10368905407459425208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-1309716752632780592015-05-10T11:57:20.408-04:002015-05-10T11:57:20.408-04:00I like the prayer at the end. Praying is a good th...I like the prayer at the end. Praying is a good thing in this situation, and I hope Giver will listen.Frank Fisherhttp://www.frankmfisher.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-62385016831130986332015-05-10T11:43:51.542-04:002015-05-10T11:43:51.542-04:00I'm glad to see what's happening with thos...I'm glad to see what's happening with those left behind. It gives me hope for a rescue. (so blog spot sure is being persnickety lately. Hope I didn't post this seventeen times!)Alexis Duranhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15582838606796213690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-37575114266071056272015-05-10T08:58:56.549-04:002015-05-10T08:58:56.549-04:00Ah! my whole comment disappeared! "His youn...Ah! my whole comment disappeared! "His young King had been taken, plucked away from before his eyes." Love this sentence, it really pulled me in. The entire piece is full of intrigue and tension. Nicely done! Happy Mother's Day/Four legged Mother's Day to you also! xoAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09436256293259964125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-2873429706723164622015-05-10T07:55:01.277-04:002015-05-10T07:55:01.277-04:00So much packed into those few sentences! With some...So much packed into those few sentences! With some polishing it will be great.Zoehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17840907736356378810noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-48439149117229968902015-05-10T07:44:02.122-04:002015-05-10T07:44:02.122-04:00Wow, great tension, Teresa! Now I need to go and r...Wow, great tension, Teresa! Now I need to go and read last week's snippet to see if I can gather a clue here... ;DDaezarkian13https://www.blogger.com/profile/08839083029518977312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-43034124787207956932015-05-10T06:26:42.580-04:002015-05-10T06:26:42.580-04:00I am sure this has something to do with our myster...I am sure this has something to do with our mysterious lady of last week. Can't wait to find out.Kim Mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08556808413747062433noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-32500884112603504552015-05-10T02:17:49.867-04:002015-05-10T02:17:49.867-04:00Yikes...I wonder if he might've been taken by ...Yikes...I wonder if he might've been taken by - well, I don't know - a woman? Suitable for marriage, perhaps? Or am I all wrong here...?<br /><br />I'm so glad I counted my one-words as sentences this week. =)Shan Jeniah Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01757607146774769663noreply@blogger.com