tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post1353337564150834201..comments2024-03-10T05:18:37.521-04:00Comments on Stories From A Starry Sky: Weekend Writing Warriors January 31, 2016Teresa Cypherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comBlogger54125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-47076361760935245062016-02-06T20:12:18.919-05:002016-02-06T20:12:18.919-05:00Thanks, Iris! :-)Thanks, Iris! :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-23126761506633116642016-02-06T06:10:50.288-05:002016-02-06T06:10:50.288-05:00Great snippet. I like the visuals in it. Well done...Great snippet. I like the visuals in it. Well done.Iris Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07282988971025667976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-83279798437103072152016-02-04T21:33:08.779-05:002016-02-04T21:33:08.779-05:00:-) Good thing to keep in mind. Thank you again, E...:-) Good thing to keep in mind. Thank you again, Ed. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-23379449287233358802016-02-04T21:31:45.064-05:002016-02-04T21:31:45.064-05:00Thanks, Elaine. I am so glad it's working!Thanks, Elaine. I am so glad it's working!Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-67466874818473358952016-02-04T21:31:18.476-05:002016-02-04T21:31:18.476-05:00Extremely, Linda! Thanks!Extremely, Linda! Thanks!Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-8852622089270467522016-02-04T21:30:40.286-05:002016-02-04T21:30:40.286-05:00Thanks, Caitlin. You have good reasons to worry. :...Thanks, Caitlin. You have good reasons to worry. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-92064651248585005612016-02-04T21:30:02.073-05:002016-02-04T21:30:02.073-05:00Thank you, Jenna! :-)Thank you, Jenna! :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-84449557722540208102016-02-04T21:29:32.334-05:002016-02-04T21:29:32.334-05:00Thanks, Mike! :-)
Thanks, Mike! :-)<br />Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-3602431210936579642016-02-04T21:28:47.163-05:002016-02-04T21:28:47.163-05:00I can't imagine the horror. Thanks, Jeff. :-)I can't imagine the horror. Thanks, Jeff. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-98755658384351832016-02-04T21:28:20.128-05:002016-02-04T21:28:20.128-05:00Thanks, Karen!Thanks, Karen!Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-1570974417326473242016-02-04T21:27:43.995-05:002016-02-04T21:27:43.995-05:00Thanks, Amy. No, it won't stop her, and she ha...Thanks, Amy. No, it won't stop her, and she has bad times ahead. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-72713815704182328772016-02-04T21:27:00.074-05:002016-02-04T21:27:00.074-05:00Thanks, Jennifer. :-)Thanks, Jennifer. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-63911236865505682352016-02-04T21:26:40.139-05:002016-02-04T21:26:40.139-05:00Thanks, Joyce. :-) I'll have to pay attention ...Thanks, Joyce. :-) I'll have to pay attention the next time I read a book with an intense action scene it. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-71225789103449462212016-02-04T21:25:47.966-05:002016-02-04T21:25:47.966-05:00Thanks, PT!Thanks, PT!Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-21891939956413964072016-02-03T22:34:17.498-05:002016-02-03T22:34:17.498-05:00I am so happy to read this little snippet inspired...I am so happy to read this little snippet inspired so many comments from you, Danielle. Thank you!Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-47447260785180271962016-02-02T22:45:10.294-05:002016-02-02T22:45:10.294-05:00Wow they really don't give up, do they? I love...Wow they really don't give up, do they? I love how she initially thought of it as a battlefield and her shock to thinking that afterwards. Great visuals and sensations as well. I think she better get running again, or lob another grenade down there if she has one. I'm curious to know what these aliens really want.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-44109735362962242702016-02-02T21:57:41.379-05:002016-02-02T21:57:41.379-05:00Great description of the physical sensations. Great description of the physical sensations. PThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02077084023001310425noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-21319462235137283252016-02-02T11:22:56.626-05:002016-02-02T11:22:56.626-05:00Buzzy Bill's made me laugh at first, then it h...Buzzy Bill's made me laugh at first, then it hit me in the gut that it represented a world gone away. And don't worry about the "shes". When the action going on is this intense, nobody is gonna be noticing pronouns! ;-)<br /><br />~Joyce ScarbroughThe Belle in Bluehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16368021976814668783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-71757837271430692902016-02-01T17:43:30.711-05:002016-02-01T17:43:30.711-05:00Great snippet. :)Great snippet. :)Jenniferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04950660535423771434noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-37243183550925226522016-02-01T12:40:07.497-05:002016-02-01T12:40:07.497-05:00I seriously admire this character and her stubborn...I seriously admire this character and her stubborn will to survive. It's clear that she's not having an easy time, but that's not going to stop her!Amy Braunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07333226005270392991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-27604816056477041622016-01-31T23:31:58.340-05:002016-01-31T23:31:58.340-05:00It's working. I'd add, though, that the ho...It's working. I'd add, though, that the horrors of the present are even more horrible when juxtaposed over the peaceful past.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-51937398338987474092016-01-31T23:01:49.181-05:002016-01-31T23:01:49.181-05:00How terrifying. Great imagery both with her emotio...How terrifying. Great imagery both with her emotions and the visual. Karen Michelle Nutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04083893569523248900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-43608283741662284542016-01-31T22:42:36.067-05:002016-01-31T22:42:36.067-05:00It must be mind-blowing to see a familiar place tu...It must be mind-blowing to see a familiar place turned into a battlefield. You capture those feeling well here.JTsuruokahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05173187123835069767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-22610356602726938642016-01-31T22:25:35.039-05:002016-01-31T22:25:35.039-05:00Very good snippet!Very good snippet!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-80277769586728275252016-01-31T22:08:58.887-05:002016-01-31T22:08:58.887-05:00Things do not look good for her! Her realization t...Things do not look good for her! Her realization that the battlefield is actually what used to be such an ordinary place is very haunting. Excellent snippet, Teresa!Jennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10308158251486924808noreply@blogger.com