tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post2378159709364708207..comments2024-03-10T05:18:37.521-04:00Comments on Stories From A Starry Sky: Six Sentence Sunday May 20th, 2012Teresa Cypherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-49865756225059205112012-05-25T14:00:55.017-04:002012-05-25T14:00:55.017-04:00Thanks, Johanna. :-) Any time I use an "ly&q...Thanks, Johanna. :-) Any time I use an "ly" word...I usually pull it back out. :-) lol... *mumbles* not sure why I keep putting them in.Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-74640785591945429522012-05-25T13:05:17.472-04:002012-05-25T13:05:17.472-04:00Sounds really good with some amazing imagery! My o...Sounds really good with some amazing imagery! My only piece of advice would be to take out "just as quickly" in the first sentence. I think the sentence will be stronger with just "receded".Johanna Garthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15515478890074610814noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-19531498700063341272012-05-24T15:41:53.546-04:002012-05-24T15:41:53.546-04:00And thank you for taking the time to read it and c...And thank you for taking the time to read it and comment! :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-27999160892427180792012-05-24T15:41:24.232-04:002012-05-24T15:41:24.232-04:00Hi Carrie,
The genre? :-) One of those mixed one...Hi Carrie,<br /><br />The genre? :-) One of those mixed ones that defies being placed neatly in a box. Fantasy, for sure--with dark places. But...there is a vein of scifi/space opera to it, also. And a touch of romance--such as it is ;-) Thanks for giving it a read :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-74838851991930852372012-05-23T08:21:01.490-04:002012-05-23T08:21:01.490-04:00Cool six sentences.there is a lot about the voice ...Cool six sentences.there is a lot about the voice and the world just in that short piece. Thanks for sharing.Jessica L. Celayahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13725283349220405323noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-82279659432270838782012-05-22T23:44:31.438-04:002012-05-22T23:44:31.438-04:00I'm curious to know what the apparitions warne...I'm curious to know what the apparitions warned her about! This sounds like dark fantasy, am I right?Wildcats Wifehttp://www.wildcatswife.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-14773283796743928192012-05-20T21:42:52.218-04:002012-05-20T21:42:52.218-04:00Thanks, Kate! She is an awesome soul...and does h...Thanks, Kate! She is an awesome soul...and does harbor truths that must be told. :-) Thanks for visiting and giving it a read. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-52607726555385279172012-05-20T21:41:52.137-04:002012-05-20T21:41:52.137-04:00Hi Angela :-) No...bad times ahead :-) Thanks fo...Hi Angela :-) No...bad times ahead :-) Thanks for visiting :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-12886858543679301862012-05-20T21:41:22.771-04:002012-05-20T21:41:22.771-04:00Thanks, Lorraine. He has spent a lot of years bei...Thanks, Lorraine. He has spent a lot of years being evil. Fun to write. Make him vile and worthy of hate...then try to bring him salvation through the readers' eyes. ;-) I love writing :-) Thanks for visiting! See you next week. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-81812080861729970292012-05-20T21:39:46.290-04:002012-05-20T21:39:46.290-04:00Thank you, Owllady. I just read a blog about tensi...Thank you, Owllady. I just read a blog about tension...and now I have something new to worry about. Have I kept the reader too much out of the loop in order to build tension. *sigh* Writers can never know enough. :-) Thanks for visiting :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-12706947649376626712012-05-20T21:38:19.528-04:002012-05-20T21:38:19.528-04:00Hi Jan. Yep...ten times darker...bad times ahead....Hi Jan. Yep...ten times darker...bad times ahead. :-) Thanks for visiting :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-4198148711007502662012-05-20T21:37:38.531-04:002012-05-20T21:37:38.531-04:00Pretty much right in the middle :-) Thank you, Je...Pretty much right in the middle :-) Thank you, Jess :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-56507758308743059552012-05-20T21:37:05.038-04:002012-05-20T21:37:05.038-04:00Thanks, Jessica. :-)Thanks, Jessica. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-54988592813141218362012-05-20T21:33:20.101-04:002012-05-20T21:33:20.101-04:00Thank you for visiting, Charmaine...and for your k...Thank you for visiting, Charmaine...and for your kind words :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-77472546929900807152012-05-20T18:54:12.242-04:002012-05-20T18:54:12.242-04:00Beautifully written. Thanks.Beautifully written. Thanks.Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-18378627563964701872012-05-20T16:20:19.857-04:002012-05-20T16:20:19.857-04:00Ooh! This sounds awesome, in a totally forbidding...Ooh! This sounds awesome, in a totally forbidding way.Katehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10261759171411084998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-62339554415167088092012-05-20T16:02:11.498-04:002012-05-20T16:02:11.498-04:00Yikes, that doesn't sound good!Yikes, that doesn't sound good!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-44966044037893374012012-05-20T12:40:35.485-04:002012-05-20T12:40:35.485-04:00Love your turn of phrase - hot breaths of warning,...Love your turn of phrase - hot breaths of warning, a moon that had taken on the faintest of pink hues. And intriguing - born in love, but lives in hatred. Great six.patonlorrainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04312527117343841653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-85181572123221334442012-05-20T11:01:53.647-04:002012-05-20T11:01:53.647-04:00Knowing this comes in the middle makes me really c...Knowing this comes in the middle makes me really curious about what came before it! Evocative word choices. Great excerpt, Teresa.Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-67419080194513807512012-05-20T08:17:15.039-04:002012-05-20T08:17:15.039-04:00That would be scary 'ten times darker' . ....That would be scary 'ten times darker' . . . good writing!<br /><br /><a href="http://jannldwk.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow"><i>Jan's place...</i></a>https://www.blogger.com/profile/12520054150803367493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-11849642305612275122012-05-20T07:40:13.137-04:002012-05-20T07:40:13.137-04:00It's hard to believe this comes in the middle....It's hard to believe this comes in the middle. It would make a great beginning. Excellent use of imagery and I love the way your dialogue flows. Great 6 this week!Jess Schirahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04930756756945812094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-22870387599279181572012-05-20T07:22:00.714-04:002012-05-20T07:22:00.714-04:00Sounds ominous. Nice six! :)Sounds ominous. Nice six! :)Jessica E. Subjecthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14356934162311768234noreply@blogger.com