tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post2885117868759148486..comments2024-03-10T05:18:37.521-04:00Comments on Stories From A Starry Sky: Weekend Writing Warriors March 26, 2017Teresa Cypherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-37303422513607307212017-03-31T14:31:57.284-04:002017-03-31T14:31:57.284-04:00He seems to be a patient man if he hasn't reac...He seems to be a patient man if he hasn't reacted to her venomous thoughts. Thoughts, on the other hand, which are not surprising. She's been through hell. Elyzabeth M. VaLeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-13391345025308657052017-03-29T10:39:43.423-04:002017-03-29T10:39:43.423-04:00The arrogance of total control doesn't lend it...The arrogance of total control doesn't lend itself to "hearing" the truth through her thoughts. I really like the dynamics in this story. Gem Sivadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01233835029255570402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-87397751708489216162017-03-27T17:47:56.744-04:002017-03-27T17:47:56.744-04:00Love this. I don't think I'd be able to ke...Love this. I don't think I'd be able to keep myself from thinking the same thoughts. Or even stay silent.Aldrea Alienhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05652344290376563676noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-71899740753273532722017-03-27T16:04:43.872-04:002017-03-27T16:04:43.872-04:00Her anger and frustration run deep - and it's ...Her anger and frustration run deep - and it's good that Lord Sand can read her thoughts. He might learn something.Rachel de Vinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13142396128885291395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-75994808498283679122017-03-27T15:32:24.039-04:002017-03-27T15:32:24.039-04:00Sounds so frustrating. Sounds so frustrating. Kimberly Gouldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14623715828708451552noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-68358338788824409032017-03-27T12:49:10.268-04:002017-03-27T12:49:10.268-04:00Great insight to her life with her husband. It mak...Great insight to her life with her husband. It makes me think though her life is very different than she's used to maybe this alien isn't going to be as bad as she's thinking. Karen Michelle Nutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04083893569523248900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-40874791868729047022017-03-27T03:09:12.813-04:002017-03-27T03:09:12.813-04:00Fair is relative, I suppose. But he's not maki...Fair is relative, I suppose. But he's not making me like him!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18141508426287090331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-25187302063076352272017-03-27T01:18:41.727-04:002017-03-27T01:18:41.727-04:00Have I mentioned how much I love her? Because I LO...Have I mentioned how much I love her? Because I LOVE her. :DAmy Braunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07333226005270392991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-52531869986770542962017-03-26T20:29:59.160-04:002017-03-26T20:29:59.160-04:00I would want to scream, too. And punch something. ...I would want to scream, too. And punch something. Danii X Hallowshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01030080907936799415noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-3008318311463799312017-03-26T20:23:19.779-04:002017-03-26T20:23:19.779-04:00I can feel her rage and longing for home. Good job...I can feel her rage and longing for home. Good job.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-41773735095880031162017-03-26T15:47:33.385-04:002017-03-26T15:47:33.385-04:00I can't blame her for her anger or wanting to ...I can't blame her for her anger or wanting to get back home. Great snippetFallonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10494175654046644119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-32884550869757678872017-03-26T15:13:10.035-04:002017-03-26T15:13:10.035-04:00I like her! Good for her for not caring that he co...I like her! Good for her for not caring that he could read her thoughts. Maybe he'll learn something!Nancy Gideonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07493107610530282642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-32358840807801363142017-03-26T13:44:41.123-04:002017-03-26T13:44:41.123-04:00LOL - her thoughts echo my own when he said that! ...LOL - her thoughts echo my own when he said that! You go, Lily, and don't hold back on the furious thoughts. Maybe you'll give him a headache :)Botanisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-57341925271139946652017-03-26T13:40:59.232-04:002017-03-26T13:40:59.232-04:00I think aliens must be very different from us, alt...I think aliens must be very different from us, although we have hierarchical societies. He must be learning how different from her thoughts. Aurora Springerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10368905407459425208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-45621539326546529432017-03-26T13:05:01.334-04:002017-03-26T13:05:01.334-04:00What a disadvantage that he can read her every tho...What a disadvantage that he can read her every thought. I guess that's his punishment too, to know exactly how she thinks and feels about him at every moment. I hope she can get back home--and that Ben will still be there.Jennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10308158251486924808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-69954474249856288962017-03-26T12:55:40.294-04:002017-03-26T12:55:40.294-04:00I love how the fact that she knows he can read her...I love how the fact that she knows he can read her thoughts makes her compare him unfavorably to her husband.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00200483339139860998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-38971768463652368482017-03-26T11:36:03.528-04:002017-03-26T11:36:03.528-04:00Her emotions come through very clearly - excellent...Her emotions come through very clearly - excellent excerpt! I hope Lord Sand learns a few things here...Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-18354699009161407762017-03-26T10:38:09.080-04:002017-03-26T10:38:09.080-04:00LOL I love her attitude and how she doesn't ca...LOL I love her attitude and how she doesn't care that he knows her thoughts. Also illustrates how different their cultures are. Great snippet! :)Jessica E. Subjecthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14356934162311768234noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-56468007714470624912017-03-26T09:39:25.751-04:002017-03-26T09:39:25.751-04:00Please get her home again. Oh what you've put ...Please get her home again. Oh what you've put her through in this incredible story. Wonderful!Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-2058022203992355402017-03-26T08:13:10.976-04:002017-03-26T08:13:10.976-04:00Lol, he thinks he's being more than fair. This...Lol, he thinks he's being more than fair. This story has a lot of twists in it.Cara Bristolhttp://www.carabristol.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-84818918423031257822017-03-26T08:06:25.499-04:002017-03-26T08:06:25.499-04:00Lord Sand it going to have a tough time keeping Li...Lord Sand it going to have a tough time keeping Lily in 'her place'. It should be an interesting experience for him, I think!Kim Mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08556808413747062433noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-13613282915300653582017-03-26T03:42:14.408-04:002017-03-26T03:42:14.408-04:00It feels right her to think about her life with he...It feels right her to think about her life with her husband at this moment. Not only is it appropriate for her to miss what's gone, it's also a nice bit of foreshadowing in that by juxtaposing the husband with this guy, you're subtly hinting that the latter will be a good guy, even if he doesn't measure up in this scene.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com