tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post3369238489341498656..comments2024-03-10T05:18:37.521-04:00Comments on Stories From A Starry Sky: Six Sentence SundayTeresa Cypherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-4609401935859633352012-09-18T00:05:30.715-04:002012-09-18T00:05:30.715-04:00Thanks, Sue. :-) She is about to have a head-on c...Thanks, Sue. :-) She is about to have a head-on collision with her future--or her insanity... :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-2857435012276908272012-09-18T00:04:31.380-04:002012-09-18T00:04:31.380-04:00Thanks, Donna. I hope he readers all worry what ha...Thanks, Donna. I hope he readers all worry what happens. ;-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-25198143810246073842012-09-18T00:04:03.279-04:002012-09-18T00:04:03.279-04:00Thanks, Kylie! Yep...and it is just the beginning...Thanks, Kylie! Yep...and it is just the beginning. But, it does have its moments. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-84577408664493397032012-09-18T00:03:34.392-04:002012-09-18T00:03:34.392-04:00Thanks, Eleri--I am glad to read that! :-)Thanks, Eleri--I am glad to read that! :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-79027718330281210252012-09-17T23:55:13.042-04:002012-09-17T23:55:13.042-04:00Thank you, Maeclair :-) !Thank you, Maeclair :-) !Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-13339263151746440972012-09-17T23:54:41.895-04:002012-09-17T23:54:41.895-04:00Thanks, Maryellen. I don't think I've caus...Thanks, Maryellen. I don't think I've caused so many people discomfort, lol, and it is strange--but good ;-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-40242076289358753442012-09-17T23:48:36.625-04:002012-09-17T23:48:36.625-04:00Thank you, Kate! Dreams...reality, dreams,memories...Thank you, Kate! Dreams...reality, dreams,memories, reality, dreams?? :-)<br />Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-35574782643819494262012-09-17T00:57:31.571-04:002012-09-17T00:57:31.571-04:00Doesn't sound like a bedtime read, but I sure ...Doesn't sound like a bedtime read, but I sure want to know what comes next.Sue Ann Bowlinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17692320238497263942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-45921360695881636482012-09-16T20:35:14.697-04:002012-09-16T20:35:14.697-04:00This scared the heck out of me. *shivers* And now ...This scared the heck out of me. *shivers* And now I'm going to worry what happens! Great scene. :)Donna Cummingshttp://www.allaboutthewriting.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-87781919357128312232012-09-16T18:56:16.108-04:002012-09-16T18:56:16.108-04:00Lots of danger and action. Nice going. Hell of a s...Lots of danger and action. Nice going. Hell of a situation to find yourself in!Kylie Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12266641348443886411noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-68045772178372616332012-09-16T18:33:54.925-04:002012-09-16T18:33:54.925-04:00Such a great sense of motion and just pure panic i...Such a great sense of motion and just pure panic in this. Really sucks you in.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12742618211008888625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-30519823340399821942012-09-16T18:30:27.122-04:002012-09-16T18:30:27.122-04:00Oooh, scary and tense! Love the heightened sense o...Oooh, scary and tense! Love the heightened sense of danger in this. Great six!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-25693456374954661362012-09-16T17:24:50.172-04:002012-09-16T17:24:50.172-04:00UGHHH I can feel the tension in my knotted stomach...UGHHH I can feel the tension in my knotted stomach as I read....fantastic!Maryellenhttp://www.maryellenbrady.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-18033308283889959112012-09-16T14:47:54.012-04:002012-09-16T14:47:54.012-04:00I really, REALLY hope that's not real! Scary ...I really, REALLY hope that's not real! Scary stuff. Well done!Kate Warrenhttp://www.katewarren.weebly.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-84955754002057246762012-09-16T14:41:37.863-04:002012-09-16T14:41:37.863-04:00Thank you, so much, Karen! :-) I am so glad you ...Thank you, so much, Karen! :-) I am so glad you were drawn in, AND want to know more. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-56525025359161214402012-09-16T14:37:33.779-04:002012-09-16T14:37:33.779-04:00Thank you, Steven. Woot! That great "AHHHHHH...Thank you, Steven. Woot! That great "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH" comment coming from the master of tension, himself! :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-35990046087221913682012-09-16T14:33:11.196-04:002012-09-16T14:33:11.196-04:00Thanks, Jess! :-) This was a great excercise in ho...Thanks, Jess! :-) This was a great excercise in holding tension through a scene. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-45176601778736278132012-09-16T14:31:09.246-04:002012-09-16T14:31:09.246-04:00Haha...something strange and nice, Jessica :-) Th...Haha...something strange and nice, Jessica :-) Thanks for visiting :-)!Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-72165245456015917912012-09-16T14:30:31.629-04:002012-09-16T14:30:31.629-04:00(Lips zipped--won't say a word) ;-) lol, than...(Lips zipped--won't say a word) ;-) lol, thanks for reading it Richard! And for your encouraging words. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-31766142098271491272012-09-16T14:26:02.579-04:002012-09-16T14:26:02.579-04:00Thanks, Marie! How is that "Red", and h...Thanks, Marie! How is that "Red", and her wolf doing?? On my way to see. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-52809404320144931762012-09-16T14:25:10.463-04:002012-09-16T14:25:10.463-04:00Thanks, Silver. You ask the best questions. I thi...Thanks, Silver. You ask the best questions. I think you could prompt anyone right out of writer's block! :-) Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-64345587404390570582012-09-16T14:24:12.036-04:002012-09-16T14:24:12.036-04:00Hey Owly :-) Yeppers. You've made an excellen...Hey Owly :-) Yeppers. You've made an excellent observation. And, blind to my own work, I also didn't think about the redundancy in focusing on eyes in two consecutive sentences. Thanks!Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-44462329186828487722012-09-16T12:11:59.849-04:002012-09-16T12:11:59.849-04:005, 6, 7... who's counting? I admit, I often sq...5, 6, 7... who's counting? I admit, I often squish two sentences into one just to make it fit. And this is a brilliant, er, 7. Very tense and wonderfully descriptive, it really draws me in and makes me want to know more. Bravo.Karen de Langehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12976578068443326404noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-47474731210336362772012-09-16T11:30:22.747-04:002012-09-16T11:30:22.747-04:00Love how you keep the tension up. Your mind goes t...Love how you keep the tension up. Your mind goes to interesting places, Teresa!<br /><br />I'm wondering though if Marissa would notice the beast's eyes more than just it's overall beyond-shocking self. Mentioning eyes does tend to increase the emotional impact of a scene, but as I'm picturing what's happening, it seems like the beast itself is so overwhelming that its eyes would be secondary.Just a thought.<br /><br />BTW, I'm pretty sure we'd all rather have 7 here than 6 :DOwlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-38004677293899506522012-09-16T11:28:32.846-04:002012-09-16T11:28:32.846-04:00AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
Ok, sorry. Great tension ...AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!<br /><br />Ok, sorry. Great tension and motion here. I love it!Daezarkian13https://www.blogger.com/profile/08839083029518977312noreply@blogger.com