tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post3589006134057809880..comments2024-03-10T05:18:37.521-04:00Comments on Stories From A Starry Sky: Weekend Writing Warriors April 29, 2018Teresa Cypherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comBlogger40125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-38865062063917373292018-05-02T14:34:43.677-04:002018-05-02T14:34:43.677-04:00Oh my. Just with those few sentences you've bu...Oh my. Just with those few sentences you've build a cool story world, or a snatch of one. Love it!Crystal Collierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03912469552483168148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-22215287371080827792018-04-30T04:20:21.656-04:002018-04-30T04:20:21.656-04:00Great snippet and the story sounds so intriguing!Great snippet and the story sounds so intriguing!Rosemary Gemmellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09311840205603508422noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-12372391909615831212018-04-29T23:42:39.303-04:002018-04-29T23:42:39.303-04:00Haha! You're a tough one, Caitlin! lolHaha! You're a tough one, Caitlin! lolTeresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-46365203858585283502018-04-29T23:42:04.999-04:002018-04-29T23:42:04.999-04:00Thanks, Christina! :-)Thanks, Christina! :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-57533885464957272802018-04-29T23:40:52.766-04:002018-04-29T23:40:52.766-04:00Thanks Elaine. Oh, how we torture our characters. ...Thanks Elaine. Oh, how we torture our characters. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-43941347748382166312018-04-29T23:40:27.883-04:002018-04-29T23:40:27.883-04:00He will try. But her world is about to crash down ...He will try. But her world is about to crash down around her. Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-54422240811319591922018-04-29T23:39:51.832-04:002018-04-29T23:39:51.832-04:00She's a tough one. That's a good thing.She's a tough one. That's a good thing.Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-28051599250758947682018-04-29T23:39:03.115-04:002018-04-29T23:39:03.115-04:00She is in a bad place. I think that lack of contro...She is in a bad place. I think that lack of control of her situation would drive me crazy. Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-13045507307612828342018-04-29T23:38:29.390-04:002018-04-29T23:38:29.390-04:00If it were just that easy... :-)
Challenges mak...If it were just that easy... :-) <br /><br />Challenges make for such a good story though. Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-66559954937779602662018-04-29T23:37:47.431-04:002018-04-29T23:37:47.431-04:00You are smart not to trust Dev. :-) Thanks, Hywel...You are smart not to trust Dev. :-) Thanks, Hywela!Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-85587821130424151352018-04-29T23:37:24.740-04:002018-04-29T23:37:24.740-04:00He has tricks, for sure. Theusand is tough, but he...He has tricks, for sure. Theusand is tough, but he is developing a chink in his armor and its name is Lily...Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-44017653564614217082018-04-29T23:35:55.203-04:002018-04-29T23:35:55.203-04:00He wasn't winning any points with me, but the ...He wasn't winning any points with me, but the way he reassures her got him one point. ;)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18141508426287090331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-60491954535327881602018-04-29T23:30:09.787-04:002018-04-29T23:30:09.787-04:00This must be incredibly hard to deal with. Great p...This must be incredibly hard to deal with. Great portrayal of her feelings!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00200483339139860998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-12105840385075955702018-04-29T21:28:07.213-04:002018-04-29T21:28:07.213-04:00Poor Lily. She still is in a hard place. I thought...Poor Lily. She still is in a hard place. I thought the snippet was very well done.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-32281494445497479202018-04-29T20:56:16.965-04:002018-04-29T20:56:16.965-04:00I hope someone shows her kindness soon! I hope someone shows her kindness soon! Amy Braunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07333226005270392991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-20597838964021505962018-04-29T19:45:15.590-04:002018-04-29T19:45:15.590-04:00That poor woman! Have so many people in her head. ...That poor woman! Have so many people in her head. Good snippet. Makes me want to know more.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-42942943449281908602018-04-29T19:32:13.072-04:002018-04-29T19:32:13.072-04:00Poor Lily indeed. I wonder what will happen next?Poor Lily indeed. I wonder what will happen next?Christiane France - Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05917176687544964756noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-20390031817484557112018-04-29T19:29:31.751-04:002018-04-29T19:29:31.751-04:00I'm sure Lily's demonstration met the requ...I'm sure Lily's demonstration met the requirements, but why do I have the feeling it won't be that easy. Karen Michelle Nutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04083893569523248900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-55815488765065765182018-04-29T18:53:30.955-04:002018-04-29T18:53:30.955-04:00I don't trust Dev Avreen either. Thesesnippets...I don't trust Dev Avreen either. Thesesnippets are so intriguing -I want to read the book when it's out!Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-49531036534354574442018-04-29T17:27:05.683-04:002018-04-29T17:27:05.683-04:00She may have the requirements to the letter of the...She may have the requirements to the letter of the law, but this slaver may yet have a trick of some sort up his sleeve. I don't trust him! I hope Theusand can counter anything he may come up with. Great snippet!Jennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10308158251486924808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-72194483906851772192018-04-29T17:12:03.820-04:002018-04-29T17:12:03.820-04:00The story is always so much better when things don... The story is always so much better when things don't go easily. ;-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-4170374785884588232018-04-29T15:50:46.197-04:002018-04-29T15:50:46.197-04:00It was for the captain, but it will never be enoug...It was for the captain, but it will never be enough for Dev Areen.Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-81940280254006612212018-04-29T15:50:13.841-04:002018-04-29T15:50:13.841-04:00Thanks, Charmaine! I did get your message, but not...Thanks, Charmaine! I did get your message, but not until earlier this morning. Got is fixed right away then. Hugs...Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-56740835512331791972018-04-29T15:49:35.336-04:002018-04-29T15:49:35.336-04:00Her whole world is about to come crashing down aro...Her whole world is about to come crashing down around her, and that has nothing to do with the slaver.Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-30824043371111381462018-04-29T15:48:24.688-04:002018-04-29T15:48:24.688-04:00:-) Your comment made me laugh, Ian. Cunning old g...:-) Your comment made me laugh, Ian. Cunning old goat... Too funny!Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.com