tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post5679818582785871307..comments2024-03-10T05:18:37.521-04:00Comments on Stories From A Starry Sky: Weekend Writing Warriors May 15, 2016Teresa Cypherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comBlogger34125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-75551887395772704982016-05-19T11:57:29.563-04:002016-05-19T11:57:29.563-04:00Boy, that would be a challenge--redeeming such a h...Boy, that would be a challenge--redeeming such a horrible character, huh? Thanks, Ed. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-14698461335272886042016-05-19T11:56:39.404-04:002016-05-19T11:56:39.404-04:00I think it will be sweet, indeed. :-)Thanks, Kim! ...I think it will be sweet, indeed. :-)Thanks, Kim! Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-59455162716352331302016-05-19T11:56:01.320-04:002016-05-19T11:56:01.320-04:00Jobe is going through a rough time. Oy, who could ...Jobe is going through a rough time. Oy, who could like a character than hurts dogs? lol Thanks, CHelle.Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-92040774434622972112016-05-19T11:55:13.495-04:002016-05-19T11:55:13.495-04:00Yeah, he did, Ian :-) Thanks!Yeah, he did, Ian :-) Thanks!Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-828010213039997562016-05-17T15:10:02.522-04:002016-05-17T15:10:02.522-04:00I was just about to type a response when I glanced...I was just about to type a response when I glanced up at The Belle in Blue's response - I vote with he - he dies a very very very very painful death - twice!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00859109777005545304noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-1335526407582572622016-05-17T14:08:55.989-04:002016-05-17T14:08:55.989-04:00Okay, I figured out a way for her to get out of th...Okay, I figured out a way for her to get out of this with her dog. YOU'RE THE AUTHOR SO DON'T DO IT! Seriously, I'm really upset by this. I hope he dies a painful death.<br /><br />~Joyce ScarbroughThe Belle in Bluehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16368021976814668783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-62334122867653829032016-05-16T07:42:08.858-04:002016-05-16T07:42:08.858-04:00Totally made me shudder. Great snippet. Totally made me shudder. Great snippet. Fallonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10494175654046644119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-76963884859908543552016-05-16T03:56:41.394-04:002016-05-16T03:56:41.394-04:00He is terrible and at the same time, I have a feel...He is terrible and at the same time, I have a feeling that she might still escape with the dog or being freed or rescued or something. Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13346034896296813841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-70103796371872749372016-05-16T03:37:35.878-04:002016-05-16T03:37:35.878-04:00"Only dead things were such a lifeless shade ..."Only dead things were such a lifeless shade of gray." Awesome line!<br />But really, this alien needs to go. No one threatens the dog and gets away with it.Aldrea Alienhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05652344290376563676noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-36296137504690359062016-05-16T02:54:07.840-04:002016-05-16T02:54:07.840-04:00That's it, this dog killer must die! Now!That's it, this dog killer must die! Now!Elizabeth Alsobrookshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18239143833626955490noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-2935228258970469672016-05-16T01:58:05.246-04:002016-05-16T01:58:05.246-04:00No! Not the dog! :S Great snippet, as usual, and l...No! Not the dog! :S Great snippet, as usual, and let's be honest– things always get worse for the heroes! I'm interested to see who her real romantic interest is, and hope he/she comes to help her soon... Not that she always needs it. ;)Amy Braunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07333226005270392991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-43596345533187784812016-05-15T22:27:45.134-04:002016-05-15T22:27:45.134-04:00Something tells me either she's going to get l...Something tells me either she's going to get loose and wreak havoc with this alien, or the cavalry is coming over the hill. Can't wait to find out which!Jennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10308158251486924808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-80546706115255154172016-05-15T22:18:59.245-04:002016-05-15T22:18:59.245-04:00She has major worries now but so do I and we'...She has major worries now but so do I and we'll work them out together!Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-26481754955335731892016-05-15T21:28:52.181-04:002016-05-15T21:28:52.181-04:00Yeah, she has no power here. And he doesn't se...Yeah, she has no power here. And he doesn't seem at all like the kind to care about consent. She needs a rescue!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18141508426287090331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-64703445404371796392016-05-15T21:02:07.201-04:002016-05-15T21:02:07.201-04:00Oh my goodness! These aliens are awful!Oh my goodness! These aliens are awful!Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-42773097102366516272016-05-15T20:29:21.190-04:002016-05-15T20:29:21.190-04:00Nice sparring dialogue. Ooooh,what a villain!Nice sparring dialogue. Ooooh,what a villain!Nancy Gideonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07493107610530282642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-41962773588370965102016-05-15T19:48:59.348-04:002016-05-15T19:48:59.348-04:00NOOOOOOO! YOU're going to kill the dog, Teresa...NOOOOOOO! YOU're going to kill the dog, Teresa? DOn't do it! KIll him! Or argh! I hope she can manage to escape him with the dog... Right? Right? Great snippet! He's awful! Elyzabeth M. VaLeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-59531628968496323722016-05-15T17:23:29.758-04:002016-05-15T17:23:29.758-04:00Poor dog! Oh no.Poor dog! Oh no.Cara Bristolhttp://www.carabristol.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-43517975540353809452016-05-15T16:44:26.211-04:002016-05-15T16:44:26.211-04:00NO!!! NOT THE DOG. She better do something! I hope...NO!!! NOT THE DOG. She better do something! I hope he gets what's coming to him. Great snippet.Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11457235963917206588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-8816721951097976002016-05-15T13:52:15.342-04:002016-05-15T13:52:15.342-04:00He's really crossed the line now. Kill him of...He's really crossed the line now. Kill him off before he kills the dog, or I fear you will have many distressed readers. Great writing.Rachel de Vinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13142396128885291395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-33430755298027165782016-05-15T13:13:32.210-04:002016-05-15T13:13:32.210-04:00Uh oh, everyone is in trouble, even the dog! I lik...Uh oh, everyone is in trouble, even the dog! I like her spirit though. Can't wait for more - terrific excerpt. Very intense.Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-27158280403521651492016-05-15T12:48:23.013-04:002016-05-15T12:48:23.013-04:00No, don't hurt the doggy! I really don't l...No, don't hurt the doggy! I really don't like this creepy deathlike alien. Great snippet.Karen Michelle Nutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04083893569523248900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-52887193828837666822016-05-15T12:44:53.261-04:002016-05-15T12:44:53.261-04:00Truly nasty!Truly nasty!Aurora Springerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10368905407459425208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-78042796193264132442016-05-15T12:23:21.281-04:002016-05-15T12:23:21.281-04:00Yeah, he's going down. Or I certainly hope so...Yeah, he's going down. Or I certainly hope so. Awesome tension and creepiness.Alexis Duranhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15582838606796213690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-14339674534510908552016-05-15T11:26:01.722-04:002016-05-15T11:26:01.722-04:00Gotta feeling she'll go "John Wick" ...Gotta feeling she'll go "John Wick" (Keanu Reeves Move) on him if he even touches her dog! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14583205410758708248noreply@blogger.com