tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post6145974796883654484..comments2024-03-10T05:18:37.521-04:00Comments on Stories From A Starry Sky: WeWriWa: DK January 28, 2023Teresa Cypherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-60599406641501693402023-02-05T00:21:05.116-05:002023-02-05T00:21:05.116-05:00Nice descriptions. Last paragraph is very thought ...Nice descriptions. Last paragraph is very thought provoking.Iris Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07282988971025667976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-16533785963265119192023-01-31T12:24:19.568-05:002023-01-31T12:24:19.568-05:00I love his storytelling. Beautiful yet poignant.I love his storytelling. Beautiful yet poignant.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-47267180047230127892023-01-31T10:34:57.736-05:002023-01-31T10:34:57.736-05:00The bittersweet sense you give us in this scene......The bittersweet sense you give us in this scene... It's a tale told in a billion voices, and yet... Eden "Kymele" Mabeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01550337993392791643noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-69685934026367737332023-01-29T17:05:13.662-05:002023-01-29T17:05:13.662-05:00Great snippet. Like Veronica said, there is a lyri...Great snippet. Like Veronica said, there is a lyrical aspect to it. Love it. <br /><br />I know you said WIP and you probably will catch this during edits, but you have closing quotations mid conversation after paragraph break.Jeff S. Brayhttps://momentsfortheheart.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-90715525110647192892023-01-29T12:53:13.725-05:002023-01-29T12:53:13.725-05:00Love the bit about her not being able to see what ...Love the bit about her not being able to see what he saw because it was in his memory. Tweeted.Daryl Devoréhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00941826725131248565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-52230203447652004822023-01-29T12:46:18.046-05:002023-01-29T12:46:18.046-05:00A lovely vision with a hint of premonition - the s...A lovely vision with a hint of premonition - the serpent is lurking! Aurora Springerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10368905407459425208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-52669981287836471092023-01-29T12:12:46.022-05:002023-01-29T12:12:46.022-05:00Very nice snippet! Almost lyrical.Very nice snippet! Almost lyrical.Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-39507052312786625692023-01-29T10:19:32.465-05:002023-01-29T10:19:32.465-05:00Sounds like a really nice placeSounds like a really nice placeFallonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-45764415248504469882023-01-29T09:00:42.447-05:002023-01-29T09:00:42.447-05:00What a wonderful vision he gives them (along with ...What a wonderful vision he gives them (along with hope!). Something worth pursuing at any risk.Nancy Gideonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07493107610530282642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-64844735903955785332023-01-28T22:21:05.588-05:002023-01-28T22:21:05.588-05:00Sounds like paradise. I really like the detail of ...Sounds like paradise. I really like the detail of the silver leaf necklaces for the children.Kate Warrenhttp://www.thekatewarren.comnoreply@blogger.com