tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post6431203799564149615..comments2024-03-10T05:18:37.521-04:00Comments on Stories From A Starry Sky: Weekend Writing Warriors: March 17, 2013Teresa Cypherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comBlogger60125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-78420218502281353472013-04-12T15:18:05.905-04:002013-04-12T15:18:05.905-04:00Exciting excerpt! And I LOVE this: "a fierce ...Exciting excerpt! And I LOVE this: "a fierce voice came from someplace deep within her, someplace that had never seen the light of day" -- incredible!Sarah Ballancehttp://sarahballance.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-24282017822956848862013-03-18T22:00:09.414-04:002013-03-18T22:00:09.414-04:00You are so awesome, and I'm so thankful to kno...You are so awesome, and I'm so thankful to know such great writers like you. :) I tweeted you something. ;) I do have a new book release, A Moment and it's not getting much traction at the moment. I'm trying hard to find my audience with it, but it's a completely different genre than what I've been publishing, so it's like starting all over again. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09899243599516908136noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-9346901203917736612013-03-18T21:50:40.075-04:002013-03-18T21:50:40.075-04:00Thanks, Marie! :-) If you could write descriptions...Thanks, Marie! :-) If you could write descriptions like me??? I know better! Ha!<br /><br />You know I'm a fan.<br /><br />btw. If you have something you'd like me to tweet--a free book promotion, a new book release, if you leave a message on my blog OR if you tweet what you'd like retweeted by me to my followers, add @teresa_willow to the tweet, I'll see it and RT it :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-5704120917012942182013-03-18T15:13:26.991-04:002013-03-18T15:13:26.991-04:00I love the black tears on the ash streaked face. G...I love the black tears on the ash streaked face. Gah, if I could only write description like you! Great job. :DAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09899243599516908136noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-83158789867656250182013-03-18T14:09:39.697-04:002013-03-18T14:09:39.697-04:00Thanks, Jess! :-)Thanks, Jess! :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-5095950743436375642013-03-18T14:09:10.594-04:002013-03-18T14:09:10.594-04:00Thanks, Kate. Bullies eventually get their comeup...Thanks, Kate. Bullies eventually get their comeuppance. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-44347984050100265522013-03-18T14:07:31.500-04:002013-03-18T14:07:31.500-04:00Thanks for the suggestion, Melonie. I'm weighi...Thanks for the suggestion, Melonie. I'm weighing and measuring the difference right now. :-) !Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-83322614461354230312013-03-18T14:06:47.079-04:002013-03-18T14:06:47.079-04:00Thanks, Melinda. :-) I hope readers can relate to ...Thanks, Melinda. :-) I hope readers can relate to this side of her. ;-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-27588744865085593202013-03-18T03:23:51.567-04:002013-03-18T03:23:51.567-04:00You created a very nice visual effect with this sn...You created a very nice visual effect with this snippet and the last bit made me smile. It's a very fluid and enjoyable snippet. Well done, Teresa!Jess Schirahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04930756756945812094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-86805556277095117922013-03-18T00:46:12.647-04:002013-03-18T00:46:12.647-04:00I love it! Dhurstan finally gets his! It'll p...I love it! Dhurstan finally gets his! It'll probably just make him hate her more, but I'm enjoying it anyway. :o)Kate Warrenhttp://www.thekatewarren.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-60691382117097380362013-03-18T00:24:32.144-04:002013-03-18T00:24:32.144-04:00Great snippet - love the action here, and of cours...Great snippet - love the action here, and of course - that moment she'd been building up to, the tension coming to a breaking point - and make or break...she shows us what she's made of. Nice!<br /><br />I'd almost simplify the moment she bests him...just have her say "Do you yield?" Then maybe repeat that phrase once more...she doesn't need the extra threats, I think we all know how serious she is at the moment. Meloniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06816058375245712743noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-24897398818923431262013-03-17T22:41:21.107-04:002013-03-17T22:41:21.107-04:00Thanks, Virginia! :-) !Thanks, Virginia! :-) !Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-87357049149306656532013-03-17T22:27:08.781-04:002013-03-17T22:27:08.781-04:00Thanks, Eleri! I think the the whole universe tho...Thanks, Eleri! I think the the whole universe thought it was funny, with the exception of Dhurstan.Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-23112708976541947552013-03-17T22:25:06.250-04:002013-03-17T22:25:06.250-04:00Thanks, Paula! Yes she did! :-)Thanks, Paula! Yes she did! :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-2539200078414278982013-03-17T21:53:34.151-04:002013-03-17T21:53:34.151-04:00Haha! Yes, humbling defeat! Thanks, dearie. :-)Haha! Yes, humbling defeat! Thanks, dearie. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-3135951018059797842013-03-17T21:53:03.279-04:002013-03-17T21:53:03.279-04:00Thanks, Elaine! :-)Thanks, Elaine! :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-64094216852568255022013-03-17T21:49:01.976-04:002013-03-17T21:49:01.976-04:00Thanks, Siobhan! :-)Thanks, Siobhan! :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-76965257296349046462013-03-17T20:52:29.947-04:002013-03-17T20:52:29.947-04:00Lol...thanks, Carrie! Dhurstan is a troubled man....Lol...thanks, Carrie! Dhurstan is a troubled man. ;-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-84492817614784677072013-03-17T20:40:49.460-04:002013-03-17T20:40:49.460-04:00Thank you, Veronica! :-)Thank you, Veronica! :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-57501657900488906982013-03-17T20:38:32.306-04:002013-03-17T20:38:32.306-04:00Love a fiesty woman who fights! Great snippet!Love a fiesty woman who fights! Great snippet!Melinda Dozierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06864718341509893591noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-43026860248713541262013-03-17T20:35:36.160-04:002013-03-17T20:35:36.160-04:00Been a long time coming, lol. Thanks, Sue Ann. :-)...Been a long time coming, lol. Thanks, Sue Ann. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-60357254061158153662013-03-17T20:35:05.716-04:002013-03-17T20:35:05.716-04:00Thank you, Vivien! And thanks for visiting. :-)Thank you, Vivien! And thanks for visiting. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-30984878731691683492013-03-17T20:19:08.428-04:002013-03-17T20:19:08.428-04:00Yay! for her. Love the " a fierce voice came...Yay! for her. Love the " a fierce voice came from someplace deep within her, someplace that had never seen the light of day, resonating steel no less hair-raising than the song of the executioner's sword."<br /><br />Very, very niceVirginia Kellyhttp://virginiakelly.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-53977549761807817402013-03-17T20:13:13.659-04:002013-03-17T20:13:13.659-04:00Thanks Marcia. I've adjusted the sentences to ...Thanks Marcia. I've adjusted the sentences to reflect your suggestions--and good suggestions they were! :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-48971659875313316292013-03-17T20:07:09.417-04:002013-03-17T20:07:09.417-04:00Steven, I actually thought of your books when I wr...Steven, I actually thought of your books when I wrote it! See how you've influenced other writers, :-)<br /><br />Thanks for visiting. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.com