tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post7673432783390209376..comments2024-03-10T05:18:37.521-04:00Comments on Stories From A Starry Sky: Weekend Writing Warriors September 11, 2016Teresa Cypherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comBlogger31125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-12561664872192937192016-09-26T11:59:23.206-04:002016-09-26T11:59:23.206-04:00Upside coming, the down, then back up again. A rol...Upside coming, the down, then back up again. A roller-coaster of a story. Thanks for visiting, Elizabeth!Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-228225513526274832016-09-26T11:58:34.132-04:002016-09-26T11:58:34.132-04:00Thanks, Arhuel. :-)Thanks, Arhuel. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-50424620614307270612016-09-16T03:14:09.099-04:002016-09-16T03:14:09.099-04:00OH, how forlorn. ::sniff:: I hope it has an upsid...OH, how forlorn. ::sniff:: I hope it has an upside in the future. Good snippet, filled with emotional baggage.Elizabeth Alsobrookshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18239143833626955490noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-65673585305083092602016-09-14T17:07:17.133-04:002016-09-14T17:07:17.133-04:00Great sense of foreboding in this snippet.Great sense of foreboding in this snippet.ARHuelsenbeckhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06354822926728541963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-31277959135564859322016-09-14T11:34:30.241-04:002016-09-14T11:34:30.241-04:00They do! I admit to being surprised at how the MC ...They do! I admit to being surprised at how the MC having a dog beside her--both in peril, has drawn comments. Thanks, Diane!Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-48233576925632219772016-09-14T11:33:39.644-04:002016-09-14T11:33:39.644-04:00Yep, separated. :-) Thanks, Ed!Yep, separated. :-) Thanks, Ed!Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-49685624342893960202016-09-14T11:33:07.978-04:002016-09-14T11:33:07.978-04:00Thanks, Joyce!Thanks, Joyce!Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-44327886619672987472016-09-13T13:10:28.684-04:002016-09-13T13:10:28.684-04:00Oh, this just tearing my heart out! I'm so gla...Oh, this just tearing my heart out! I'm so glad you said she's going to meet someone soon who might give her some comfort. <br /><br />~Joyce ScarbroughThe Belle in Bluehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16368021976814668783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-51025080960364722632016-09-12T22:49:27.915-04:002016-09-12T22:49:27.915-04:00Thanks, Rin-Rin!Thanks, Rin-Rin!Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-52831250836689694882016-09-12T10:30:05.594-04:002016-09-12T10:30:05.594-04:00Oh Oh! I wonder what's going to happen! I'...Oh Oh! I wonder what's going to happen! I'm looking forward to next week, great snippet!Rin-Rinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01768581512939794246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-48487832750893015792016-09-12T08:57:09.509-04:002016-09-12T08:57:09.509-04:00Dogs and babies steal the show. We're all so c...Dogs and babies steal the show. We're all so concerned about Jobe that we slide over what will happen to her. BTW, the caption under the memorial "and unborn" broke my heart, too.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-20302358694183594012016-09-12T02:42:48.152-04:002016-09-12T02:42:48.152-04:00Oh no, she's separated from the dog. That'...Oh no, she's separated from the dog. That's been one of the things that's humanized her. I hope she gets reunited.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-64982715057182558082016-09-12T00:32:19.739-04:002016-09-12T00:32:19.739-04:00Yeah, I didn't think he'd let her get away...Yeah, I didn't think he'd let her get away with not participating in... whatever it is he's planning.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18141508426287090331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-45614130497219110812016-09-11T23:20:54.419-04:002016-09-11T23:20:54.419-04:00She certainly has a talent for finding trouble, do...She certainly has a talent for finding trouble, doesn't she? She's like a trouble magnet. Great snippet! :DAmy Braunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07333226005270392991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-69696186972795264662016-09-11T21:16:56.864-04:002016-09-11T21:16:56.864-04:00Hi Cara. Thanks for all the encouragement. I feel ...Hi Cara. Thanks for all the encouragement. I feel like it's going the right direction--to have you come back week after week to read new lines.<br /><br />Yes, a hero is trying to come onto the scene. He was introduced briefly a month ago, perhaps. He's not been able to locate her on the ship yet. I'll toggle back and forth (his POV and hers) over the next several snippets to give a better glimpse of what he's about. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-39073826635103956372016-09-11T21:11:31.145-04:002016-09-11T21:11:31.145-04:00This girl is as brave as they come. I love that sh...This girl is as brave as they come. I love that she made provision for her dog before she left.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-87939611012042683222016-09-11T18:38:32.031-04:002016-09-11T18:38:32.031-04:00Jobe adds extra comfort for her in her predicament...Jobe adds extra comfort for her in her predicament, but worrying about the dog also adds to her torment. I'm sure you will realise that your readers are currently starting a 'Save Jobe' campaign! Good snippet and quite riveting.Rachel de Vinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13142396128885291395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-42357991711566186252016-09-11T17:11:48.739-04:002016-09-11T17:11:48.739-04:00I love how she still thinks of Jobe when she could...I love how she still thinks of Jobe when she could be facing death. I'm intrigued to know where he's taking her.Karen Michelle Nutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04083893569523248900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-64666370338660877922016-09-11T15:23:05.961-04:002016-09-11T15:23:05.961-04:00Are WE going to meet a hero. I left out a word.Are WE going to meet a hero. I left out a word.Cara Bristolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13787980548582603649noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-77043500466564835442016-09-11T15:22:41.655-04:002016-09-11T15:22:41.655-04:00I've been a faithful reader every week and loo...I've been a faithful reader every week and look forward to this post. Today I'm wondering...is this a romance? Are going to meet a hero? Or is Lily going to battle the aliens by herself?Cara Bristolhttp://www.carabristol.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-65842475407461390552016-09-11T14:36:33.804-04:002016-09-11T14:36:33.804-04:00Being picked on is not what I think of as voluntee...Being picked on is not what I think of as volunteering! I guess he was just determined enough. Glad someone can watch the dog, though, and great snippet!Karen de Langehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12976578068443326404noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-46440688350075525412016-09-11T12:53:32.532-04:002016-09-11T12:53:32.532-04:00Save the pooch and it will save her. How's tha...Save the pooch and it will save her. How's that for a good ending.Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-17387842295556644362016-09-11T12:31:13.892-04:002016-09-11T12:31:13.892-04:00Ugh, now I'm even more worried for her. I'...Ugh, now I'm even more worried for her. I'm glad she has someone who can watch the dog at least.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00200483339139860998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-30840973580032520182016-09-11T12:11:18.020-04:002016-09-11T12:11:18.020-04:00She didn't even volunteer, but maybe she'l...She didn't even volunteer, but maybe she'll find a friend. Aurora Springerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10368905407459425208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-9512553555037877572016-09-11T11:38:56.057-04:002016-09-11T11:38:56.057-04:00Dev Areen just really has it in for her, doesn'...Dev Areen just really has it in for her, doesn't he? At least she found someone to watch over Jobe.Alexis Duranhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15582838606796213690noreply@blogger.com