tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post8627630995645194232..comments2024-03-10T05:18:37.521-04:00Comments on Stories From A Starry Sky: Weekend Writing Warriors: Sunday May 19thTeresa Cypherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comBlogger49125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-39250705788144611362013-05-25T21:32:10.370-04:002013-05-25T21:32:10.370-04:00I can relate to a half-hearted sword drill - that ...I can relate to a half-hearted sword drill - that would be me, especially if it's mid-day and that much sun! You did a great job describing the scene with just a few words; however, the first sentence is a little bit confusing - perhaps a little long-ish?<br /><br />Susan Schilerhttp://teamfamilyonline.com/sacred-dance-of-life/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-69644929382961445102013-05-23T21:52:14.792-04:002013-05-23T21:52:14.792-04:00Thanks, India! :-)Thanks, India! :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-19043937970735490232013-05-23T21:51:58.639-04:002013-05-23T21:51:58.639-04:00Thanks for all of the good advice, Susan :-)Thanks for all of the good advice, Susan :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-8326361550444118472013-05-23T21:51:32.851-04:002013-05-23T21:51:32.851-04:00Shaynda becomes a more central character in book 3...Shaynda becomes a more central character in book 3. And she can be quite harsh, snippy, bordering mean. But the reader is given the reasons why she's that way. :-) Thanks, Keeley! :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-78664660426373682312013-05-23T21:49:58.414-04:002013-05-23T21:49:58.414-04:00Thnaks, A.S. ;-) !Thnaks, A.S. ;-) !Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-83838097137288112512013-05-23T21:49:40.828-04:002013-05-23T21:49:40.828-04:00Thanks, Kate :-) !Thanks, Kate :-) !Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-36233613337456328192013-05-23T21:31:07.108-04:002013-05-23T21:31:07.108-04:00Thanks, Veronica. She is a no bs kind of person. :...Thanks, Veronica. She is a no bs kind of person. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-44992769794027346312013-05-23T21:30:29.398-04:002013-05-23T21:30:29.398-04:00Thanks, Steven :-)Thanks, Steven :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-51569916099254195742013-05-23T21:30:15.278-04:002013-05-23T21:30:15.278-04:00Thanks, Jess! :-)Thanks, Jess! :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-8226567958617527262013-05-23T21:30:00.446-04:002013-05-23T21:30:00.446-04:00Oy! lol. It's intentional. It's a cultural...Oy! lol. It's intentional. It's a cultural thing. Hmmm... lol, you've given me food for thought (again) . Thanks, Owly! Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-904725386765729372013-05-23T21:28:42.218-04:002013-05-23T21:28:42.218-04:00No, it's not just you, Sue. And I'm mullin...No, it's not just you, Sue. And I'm mulling it over. :-) Thanks for your comment! :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-53050123801274718792013-05-23T21:18:24.264-04:002013-05-23T21:18:24.264-04:00Thanks, Charmaine. It's my pleasure! :-) You ...Thanks, Charmaine. It's my pleasure! :-) You visitors make it all worthwhile. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-30640137174382032682013-05-23T20:44:10.818-04:002013-05-23T20:44:10.818-04:00No matter the world, the culture, the creature, wo...No matter the world, the culture, the creature, word does get around, lol. Thanks. Rose!Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-8345295179871698852013-05-23T20:19:25.961-04:002013-05-23T20:19:25.961-04:00Thanks, Elaine! :-)Thanks, Elaine! :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-87343837802351112192013-05-23T20:19:04.197-04:002013-05-23T20:19:04.197-04:00Thanks Penny. Looking back over it, the two "...Thanks Penny. Looking back over it, the two "haves" without a contraction is a bit off-putting. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-10776971436147499562013-05-23T20:12:03.558-04:002013-05-23T20:12:03.558-04:00Thanks, Karen! :-) And dang good to see you again...Thanks, Karen! :-) And dang good to see you again! :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-46617582014383731742013-05-23T20:02:23.780-04:002013-05-23T20:02:23.780-04:00Hi Cindy. Thanks! You've probably come across...Hi Cindy. Thanks! You've probably come across many such cultural tidbits in your quest into history. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-4129466738974244952013-05-23T20:01:32.793-04:002013-05-23T20:01:32.793-04:00Thanks, Kylie. First sentence, noted. :-)Thanks, Kylie. First sentence, noted. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-5137729435950292912013-05-23T20:01:10.155-04:002013-05-23T20:01:10.155-04:00Thanks, Debbie. I might be guilty of creative punc...Thanks, Debbie. I might be guilty of creative punctuation to make it all fit in. :-) Ha! ;-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-40791483984156490902013-05-23T20:00:13.681-04:002013-05-23T20:00:13.681-04:00Hi Siobhan. Always such good advice! Thank you (ag...Hi Siobhan. Always such good advice! Thank you (again). :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-81747418561810889522013-05-23T19:59:47.730-04:002013-05-23T19:59:47.730-04:00Thanks, SJ :-) !Thanks, SJ :-) !Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-43221495709969596222013-05-23T19:59:34.113-04:002013-05-23T19:59:34.113-04:00Thanks, Violet! ;-)Thanks, Violet! ;-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-85363133361295657272013-05-23T19:23:48.411-04:002013-05-23T19:23:48.411-04:00Thanks, Samantha! :-)Thanks, Samantha! :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-86250692991073148012013-05-23T19:19:14.268-04:002013-05-23T19:19:14.268-04:00Thanks, Linda :-)Thanks, Linda :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-84902600393764705902013-05-22T10:50:36.467-04:002013-05-22T10:50:36.467-04:00Dang, that's true! Thanks, Joyce!Dang, that's true! Thanks, Joyce! Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.com