tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.comments2024-03-10T05:18:37.521-04:00Stories From A Starry SkyTeresa Cypherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comBlogger14258125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-43349108362811669132023-05-07T16:40:16.665-04:002023-05-07T16:40:16.665-04:00I'd like to see more of this story, although i...I'd like to see more of this story, although it is dark.Aurora Springerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10368905407459425208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-38405665341624128962023-03-26T18:52:54.911-04:002023-03-26T18:52:54.911-04:00You can feel the rage in his words. Great snippetYou can feel the rage in his words. Great snippetJSBrayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05632723899375591372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-10129162163155729922023-03-26T13:24:01.271-04:002023-03-26T13:24:01.271-04:00And now we know why they are so filled with anger,...And now we know why they are so filled with anger, and rightly so. I hope they are able to find peace eventually. Moving scene. Tweeted.Jennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10308158251486924808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-86271367059363417142023-03-26T10:25:25.809-04:002023-03-26T10:25:25.809-04:00Very tense and anger filled. Hoping he finds peace...Very tense and anger filled. Hoping he finds peace, but guessing that will be much later in the story. Tweeted.Daryl Devoréhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00941826725131248565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-84258531853204106502023-03-26T10:04:13.225-04:002023-03-26T10:04:13.225-04:00No, there will be no let bygones be bygones here -...No, there will be no let bygones be bygones here - and rightfully so. Great scene!Nancy Gideonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07493107610530282642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-59855030952171626282023-03-26T09:17:10.342-04:002023-03-26T09:17:10.342-04:00"Love and forgiveness will not bring back our..."Love and forgiveness will not bring back our garden." I absolutely get it. I hope they will find some peace at some point though. Viviana MacKadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14032272004682743995noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-67745102828987639452023-03-26T06:17:46.083-04:002023-03-26T06:17:46.083-04:00intense background details. no surprise there'...intense background details. no surprise there's a lot of angerIris Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07282988971025667976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-61939458077908146532023-03-21T01:48:03.375-04:002023-03-21T01:48:03.375-04:00Great snippet. No wonder he's consumed with an...Great snippet. No wonder he's consumed with anger. Bad things happened indeed.Iris Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07282988971025667976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-39345666933901453412023-03-19T23:59:06.867-04:002023-03-19T23:59:06.867-04:00Ooh, a dark snippet today. Love your writing. Keep...Ooh, a dark snippet today. Love your writing. Keep it up and thanks for sharing.Heather Boydhttps://www.heather-boyd.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-35878750618981532092023-03-19T22:33:19.808-04:002023-03-19T22:33:19.808-04:00The thunderous voice startles not just the listene...The thunderous voice startles not just the listeners in the story but the readers as well. We must pay attention and therefore know exactly what happened to another world,like what happened to Earth in the story. So well done! Tweeted.Jennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10308158251486924808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-75641754871461640592023-03-19T18:26:36.905-04:002023-03-19T18:26:36.905-04:00Yikes. Powerful scene. Good to have you back, boss...Yikes. Powerful scene. Good to have you back, boss. JSBrayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05632723899375591372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-14176917632417754912023-03-19T17:04:53.602-04:002023-03-19T17:04:53.602-04:00I love your writing. So descriptive and poignant. ...I love your writing. So descriptive and poignant. His story really grabbed my heart.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-70876798330597786982023-03-19T14:36:12.823-04:002023-03-19T14:36:12.823-04:00So raw, and horribly real great snippet!So raw, and horribly real great snippet!Viviana MacKadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14032272004682743995noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-33302340104062049782023-03-19T13:10:03.486-04:002023-03-19T13:10:03.486-04:00I'm glad you are posting again.I'm glad you are posting again.Aurora Springerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10368905407459425208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-13616454912166605022023-03-19T13:09:25.035-04:002023-03-19T13:09:25.035-04:00It's horrible. But Lily has experienced the sa...It's horrible. But Lily has experienced the same on her home.Aurora Springerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10368905407459425208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-60989531826094905042023-03-19T12:58:51.665-04:002023-03-19T12:58:51.665-04:00Agree with Nancy - powerful.Agree with Nancy - powerful.Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-12186503542995698542023-03-19T10:18:29.708-04:002023-03-19T10:18:29.708-04:00How horribly brutal and sad. Tweeted. My link is b...How horribly brutal and sad. Tweeted. My link is broken - https://daryldevore.blogspot.com/2023/03/with-each-movement-white-light-grew_02023260774.htmlDaryl Devoréhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00941826725131248565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-1424234003525166712023-03-19T08:37:49.799-04:002023-03-19T08:37:49.799-04:00Whoa! Powerful scene! What a great way to get back...Whoa! Powerful scene! What a great way to get backstory in.Nancy Gideonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07493107610530282642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-11870496909010337892023-02-07T20:00:38.114-05:002023-02-07T20:00:38.114-05:00The shattering of a dream... that's evil in i...The shattering of a dream... that's evil in itself but also the sign of a storyteller's power, to lull one into the dream so deeply.<br /><br />I wish you the best with your muse. Though... maybe yours and mine are out partying without us.Eden "Kymele" Mabeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01550337993392791643noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-44848305444576086192023-02-05T23:35:39.581-05:002023-02-05T23:35:39.581-05:00Boom, and the magic was gone. Nicely done, didn...Boom, and the magic was gone. Nicely done, didn't expect that.Iris Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07282988971025667976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-37743111856154131342023-02-05T23:17:25.832-05:002023-02-05T23:17:25.832-05:00This sounds like the dream of peace and love we al...This sounds like the dream of peace and love we all wish for--and can achieve to some extent, but like the strident voice at the end says, it never lasts. I still love that he can hear her thoughts!Jennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10308158251486924808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-42272407496837482792023-02-05T14:29:05.957-05:002023-02-05T14:29:05.957-05:00What storytelling! First the sweet, idyllic openin...What storytelling! First the sweet, idyllic opening and then boom, evil shows up! Those kids are going to remember this for sure.Kate Warrenhttp://www.thekatewarren.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-53663309132310830382023-02-05T12:29:59.113-05:002023-02-05T12:29:59.113-05:00Lovely - I wanted to see the memories he showed. A...Lovely - I wanted to see the memories he showed. And the interruption is great! Aurora Springerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10368905407459425208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-81786116901584017232023-02-05T11:54:18.720-05:002023-02-05T11:54:18.720-05:00It's all very lyrical until the one voice brea...It's all very lyrical until the one voice breaks the spell! Enjoyed the snippet.Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4696914224277711875.post-59999796492133804782023-02-05T09:55:43.670-05:002023-02-05T09:55:43.670-05:00What a shattering line after such peace. Tweeted.What a shattering line after such peace. Tweeted.Daryl Devoréhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00941826725131248565noreply@blogger.com