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Saturday, January 11, 2020

WeWriWa: EU 11





Welcome to Weekend Writing Warriors, where we share snips and bits of amazing tales by talented authors and writers. Each week, participants sign up HERE at wewriwa.com then post 8 to 10 sentences of their work, published or unpublished (we like it all) on their own blog to go live by 9:00 AM each Sunday. Then we visit each other and read and comment, critique, encourage--all those things that do a solitary writer's heart good.
     
Snippet Sunday group from facebook, not us, but many of our participants do both, is HERE

     This snippet if from  Emmily, Unbound, a contemporary romance with sci-fi elements. It's in First-person.  
     There could be wonky punctuation to keep within the #wewriwa guidelines. Emmily, the main character has lost pretty much everything in the last twelve months. She and her dog, Murphy, are moving to an old hunting camp her dad and mom willed to her. They've just arrived. 
     This is chapter one. Last week's snippet ended with this:  I sigh...  Well, the hunting camp isn't quite as rough-looking as the sign at the end of the lane, but it's going to need some work.
     We continue from there.
     The snippet: 
     
    
Maybe I should have gotten a motel room back on Route 6, but it's pretty late for that now.
     Something scurries from the front porch when I step out of the car. I jump back inside, slamming the door shut twice as fast as I opened it. What was I thinking, coming up here all alone—and it’s almost dark? I must be nuts. I shudder, unsure if it’s the chilly air, or fear causing it. Murphy's sitting up, looking around at the dusky world outside of the windows.
     Sleeping in the car seems like a good option.
      No. I know I’m braver than this, at least marginally braver than my knee-jerk reaction was a minute ago. 
 
I dunno about you guys, but I'd probably be doing a donut and heading back to Route 6.    
        
      I'm looking for Beta-readers--if anyone is interested, I'll send you a copy. Email me at cypherbuss at yahoo dot com
      That's it for this week.  Thanks for visiting! I am truly grateful for comments, suggestions, and for you taking the time to read it.

20 comments:

  1. Things that go scurry in the night can daunting when you aren't familiar with them.

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    1. Absolutely true! She's definitely spooked right now. Thanks, Ed!

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  2. I would have stopped at Motel 6 to begin with. The woods and a dark cabin are nothing to play with in the dark. I think she needs to regroup and come back in the morning! Loving this story, Teresa!

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    1. She might be making poor decisions, lately. ;-) Bad for her, but it makes for good stories. :-) Thanks, Jenna!

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  3. As long as there's nothing scurrying inside, she should be okay. Great snippet!

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  4. I'd turn around and find that motel. Or sleep in the car. Things always look better in the morning.

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    1. That is amazing, huh? How much better things look in the morning. :-) Thanks, Diane!

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  5. She seems not to have thought this through too well...but I'd probably get out of the car and go inside, rather than sleep in the car! Interesting twists and turns this story takes. Enjoyed the snippet!

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    1. Yep. I think emotionally, she's not in a good place right now, and it might be affecting her decision-making skills. :-) Thanks, Jean!

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  6. I hope she has a flashlight and some food!

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    1. Haha! You and she think alike! Coming up in the next page or so. :-) Thanks, Aurora!

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  7. She's in a very scary situation I can understand her hesitation. I love the flow of your writing and the 'voice'! Well done!

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    1. Thank you Lyn. You encouraging words are making me brave. :-)

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  8. I'd be turning around with you, Teresa. :) Enjoyed the snippet.

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    1. Thanks, Karen! It's fun living vicariously through characters. The things I'd never do... :-)

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  9. Motel. Definitely! Things HOPEFULLY will look better in the morning. But why do I think she won't listen to me?

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    1. She might not be thinking right. Just wait another day! lol Thanks for visiting, Nancy!

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  10. Renting a motel room and returning in the light of day definitely sounds like a good idea about now.

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    1. Oh, if Emmily would only listen to all of our suggestions. lol Thanks, Aldrea!

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