Sunday, September 9, 2012
Six Sentence Sunday: September 9, 2012
Hope everyone had a good week. For anyone who doesn't know, Six Sentence Sunday is a bloghop--and one of the friendliest. Participants post six sentences of their writing, then the fun begins. Readers hop from blog to blog, sharing opinions, critiques and encouragement. We know what a solitary pursuit writing is--and Six Sentence Sunday is a great way to meet other writers and take a break from our solitude. Complete rules and a sign up form are at the site here.
Returning to my WIP, ATNS, Marissa is running for her life. The scene began with her playing hide and seek with her toddler, and something strange happened--a blinding light and a disorienting sound. She's not at the State Park anymore, and her son is not with her. She's running through what seems to be a metal building. At the end of last week's six, she witnessed something being bitten in half by a very large beast.
Wow, lol, that might be the shortest six I've ever posted. :-)
I'm particularly curious about the word "God", in her thought. Is it more or less powerful with it included? My intent was not a prayer or to summon god. It is just fright. Does it feel that way?
All comments, opinions, criticisms, greatly appreciated and graciously acknowledged. Have a wonderful week, all. :-)