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This snippet is from Emmily, Unbound, an SFR story. Emmily, the main character, has lost pretty much everything in the last twelve months: her marriage, her parents, her job, and her house. She and her dog, Murphy, are moving to an old hunting camp her parents willed to her. It's remote, in the mountains of Pennsylvania. After arriving at near dark, she saw someone in the woods at the edge of her yard. She ran back in the house and has systematically (while trying not to freak out) checked locks, closed curtains, and thought through what to do to stay safe.
This snippet is from Emmily, Unbound, an SFR story. Emmily, the main character, has lost pretty much everything in the last twelve months: her marriage, her parents, her job, and her house. She and her dog, Murphy, are moving to an old hunting camp her parents willed to her. It's remote, in the mountains of Pennsylvania. After arriving at near dark, she saw someone in the woods at the edge of her yard. She ran back in the house and has systematically (while trying not to freak out) checked locks, closed curtains, and thought through what to do to stay safe.
There could be wonky punctuation to keep within wewriwa guidelines.
Last week's snippet (she's talking about a broom-- and she has a paring knife) ended with this: I can whack someone from a distance with it. I pray I
don’t have to use either.
The snippet:
When
my breathing slows and my racing heart calms, when I can think again, I pick
up a notebook full of my writing notes and turn to a blank page. Squinting, at the fringes of the firelight, I make a list. Baseball bat is on the top line because…it’s not a bad idea. Next are
window blinds and cleaners--make that a boatload of cleaning supplies. Then I
add the groceries I’ll need for a couple of weeks, starting with water for drinking and
cooking.
The list is long when I finally can’t force my eyes to stay
open. After one last check on the chairs propped against the doors, I crawl
into a sleeping bag on the living room floor.
Fire-shadows play and dance, flickering on the walls and the ceiling as my racing thoughts finally slow. Instead of counting sheep, I repeat over and over, "There wasn’t anyone in the woods." As I drift off,
I clench the broom handle, because no matter what I tell myself, I know what I
saw…
That's it for this week. It finishes chapter one in the book. Thanks for visiting! I am truly grateful for
comments and suggestions, and for you taking the time to read it.