Weekend Writing Warriors December 28, 2014

Welcome Warriors. Last post of the year! I hope your Christmas or Chanukah was happy. And I wish joy, peace, love, and writing success for you in 2015. Weekend Writing Warriors is a weekly bloghop. Each week, participants sign up HERE at wewriwa.com, then post 8 sentences of their work, published or unpublished, to go live between noon, Saturday and 9:00 AM Sunday EST. Then we visit each other and read, comment, critique, encourage--all those things that do a solitary writer's heart good. 
          Snippet Sunday group from facebook--not us, but many of our participants do both, can be found HERE     
          Set up: The MC was vanished without a trace for two years, then returned "without a trace" too. She'd been found in the desert alone after having just given birth. After spending a year being treated for being delusional-- she's convinced that her dreams are actually her missing memories, she's now working with a volunteer church counselor, Rayanne. 
    Continuing on from last week's 8, Marissa is meeting with  Rayanne. Last week, Rayanne spoke last. The final sentence was  “People too often choose to conceal their pain, and suffer alone.”  In Marissa's POV:

“In the silence that followed, Marissa felt naked and exposed.  Had this woman, little more than a stranger, just pegged her? Or maybe it wasn’t directed at her, just a statement in general about all of the people like her…struggling and alone. Moving on to something safe, to anything other than talking about flawed lives, she asked, “What was your childhood like, Rayanne?” 
           “It was good.”

Rayanne’s smile remained genuine; there must be no child-sized skeletons hiding in her closet.  “Just good?”

 That's it. What works. What doesn't? I'm grateful for every comment you leave. :-)

A Red Plastic Bird and Magic

There's a little red bird, plastic and sparkly, hung by a child's hands. It dangles from a tree in my yard. It's a bit of real magic. Really. I admit it was unplanned-- the bird on the tree all year. Well, at first it was unplanned.

During a late winter thaw in February, I discovered it on the ground in the icy, crumbling leaves several feet from the tree. It was no doubt blown there by a racing north wind, right off the branch where little fingers had set it to perch.

Rather than carry it to the basement and dig out the container holding the rest of the ornaments, I tucked it back on the tree to ride out the winter. And the spring. And the summer. Even autumn as it turned out.  It spent the year on the rose of sharon tree .

Natalie discovered it there one spring day while we were walking around the yard looking for emerging daffodils and tulips. She asked why one red bird from Christmas was still on the tree, and before I could answer, she did.  Her eyebrows shot up and a knowing smile spread across her lips. Magic twinkled in her eyes. "Oh. Because we see it and we think of Christmas."


From that moment on, the red plastic bird in the bush was intentional. There were times when I was weeding around the hosta plants beneath the trees, and I'd look at the redbird and smile while remembering the day Nattie first hung it there. And then I'd smile thinking about how it "flew" with the wind. And there were days in summer when we built a fire to toast marshmallows, and the bird hung just beyond our chairs around the fire ring. More magic.

The roses bloomed around it in late summer, and then the leaves faded to a soft autumn gold. Still the redbird hung, its sparkles fading, but not the magic in the memories it brought.

A Saturday in November, Nattie and her parents and baby sister had just arrived.  She raced into the house--straight  to where I was in the kitchen and said, "Grammie! We need to decorate the trees before it gets dark. We don't have much time!" I left kitchen chores and headed to the basement to get the ornaments. Pap went too because he knew "exactly" where they were." And I think there was a bounce (magic-induced) in his step.

A little bit of magic began to spread around while we were decorating the trees. Nattie announced she was going to hang the first ornament, "Next to the bird." She was so excited, she ran between the trees, then back to get more of the shiny orbs.

Before long, Nattie's aunt Ziggy was with us, jacket-less, in the cold (the lure of magic is strong), helping to hang ornaments. Quick to follow was Nattie's daddy, fortuitous his arrival was. One of these little trees Nattie and I have decorated every year since she was one year old had suddenly grown too tall for anyone but her dad to reach the top.

We stuck it out until it was too dark to see what we were doing, and Nattie's fingers were cold--she'd removed her gloves to get the hooks and ribbons over the branches.

The magic glow hung over the evening, over finishing cooking the meal, over cleaning up after the gang left. Things that might have been just chores that had to be done  turned to joy-- with a little Christmas magic applied. And all it took was a child and a red plastic bird to remind me of that magic.

While I finished putting away silverware and pans, I mused over what a wonderful evening it'd been, and I thought about the red plastic bird, and about magic. About real magic. Without conscious thought, the words of Charles Dickens came out of my mouth. "I will honor Christmas in my heart, and try to keep it all the year." 

What exactly did Dickens' words mean? Keep Christmas? Or did he mean, keep magic in his heart?

 Christmas is magic. When we look past the hustle-bustle and the stress of never enough money or time, we feel the magic. When we move beyond a tiresome cookie baking marathon, to having cookies, tea, and a good talk with a friend, we feel the magic. When we open our hearts to the moment, to the wholly joyous in this minute, rather than the endless list of what must be done next, we open our hearts to the magic. When we love, and when we give... well, magic surrounds us.

We all need to keep a red plastic bird hanging, even if it hangs only in our heart, to summon the magic as easily as children do...the whole year through. Because real magic lives...even beyond Christmas.

Weekend Writing Warriors December 14, 2014

Welcome Warriors! Weekend Writing Warriors is a weekly bloghop. Each week, participants sign up HERE at wewriwa.com, then post 8 sentences of their work, published or unpublished, to go live between noon, Saturday and 9:00 AM Sunday EST. Then we visit each other and read, comment, critique, encourage--all those things that do a solitary writer's heart good. 
          Snippet Sunday group from facebook--not us, but many of our participants do both, can be found HERE     
          Set up: The MC was vanished without a trace for two years, then returned "without a trace" too. She'd been found in the desert alone after having just given birth. After spending a year being treated for being delusional-- she's convinced that her dreams are actually her missing memories, she's now working with a volunteer church counselor, Rayanne. 
    Continuing on from last week's 8, Marissa is meeting with , Rayanne. Rissa asked Rayanne if there is a God.  Last week, The last sentence was Marissa telling Rayanne, “I'm not playing this game.”

“Not a game at all; I’m just trying to look at it a different way. Do I think some people have perfect lives? Well, compared to others, it appears that way, but I don’t think anyone really does. The old saying about into each life some rain must fall? I think it’s true. Maybe we don’t see the flaws in the lives of others because people hide their darkest days. People too often choose to conceal their pain, and suffer alone.”
  That's it. What works. What doesn't? I'm grateful for every comment you leave. :-)

Weekend Writing Warriors: December 7, 2014

Welcome Warriors! Happy December. It's just two weeks from the Winter Solstice. Then daylight starts to lengthen each day. Just two weeks...  :-D
             Weekend Writing Warriors is a weekly bloghop. Each week, participants sign up HERE at wewriwa.com, then post 8 sentences of their work, published or unpublished, to go live between noon, Saturday and 9:00 AM Sunday EST. Then we visit each other and read, comment, critique, encourage--all those things that do a solitary writer's heart good. 
          Snippet Sunday group from facebook--not us, but many of our participants do both, can be found HERE     
          Set up: The MC was vanished without a trace for two years, then returned "without a trace" too. She'd been found in the desert alone after having just given birth. After spending a year being treated for being delusional-- she's convinced that her dreams are actually her missing memories, she's now working with a volunteer counselor, Rayanne. 
    Continuing on from last week's 8, Marissa is meeting with , Rayanne. Rissa asked Rayanne if there is a God.  Last week, The last sentence was Marissa asking, “Why, why then does it seem that some people have perfect lives without doing anything special to deserve them?”

Rayanne nodded her head. " And some people have challenge after challenge thrown at them?”

“Challenge? I was thinking more like misery and heartache.”

“It does seem pretty unfair, but let me ask you this. Who has a perfect life?”

Marissa looked away. “I’m not playing this game.”

That's it. What works. What doesn't? I'm grateful for every comment you leave. :-)

Weekend Writing Warriors: November 30, 2014

This past week, the writing world lost a wonderful member, and we at wewriwa lost one of our Warriors. Sue Ann Bowling passed away after a long battle with cancer.  A family member announced it in a comment beneath her last blog post. If you'd like to leave a comment of condolence, the post is here: Homecoming Blog

I will surely miss her brilliant Scifi, and her forthrightness when it came to critting my weekly 8 sentence posts. Note* as of this morning, Sue Ann's Weekend Writing Warrior past for this week has appeared on her blog. She wasn't here to sign up for the linky list. She must have had her post scheduled. It's here: Rescue Operation

Weekend Writing Warriors is a weekly bloghop. Each week, participants sign up HERE at wewriwa.com, then post 8 sentences of their work, published or unpublished, to go live between noon, Saturday and 9:00 AM Sunday EST. Then we visit each other and read, comment, critique, encourage--all those things that do a solitary writer's heart good. 
          Snippet Sunday group from facebook--not us, but many of our participants do both, can be found HERE     
          Set up: The MC was vanished without a trace for two years, then returned "without a trace" too. She'd been found in the desert alone after having just given birth. After spending a year being treated for being delusional-- she's convinced that her dreams are actually her missing memories, she's now working with a volunteer counselor, Rayanne. 
    In today's snippet, Marissa is meeting with , Rayanne. Last week, the reader was looking at prints hanging on the walls of  Rayanne's office--through Marissa's eyes. The last sentence was: 

" Her wonderful mood, the skip in her step, all left behind in a shadow made by the sun in an art print.."

She blinked back tears, too embarrassed to let them fall, and then searched Rayanne’s face for any reaction to her self-pity. “I do have the million dollar question, though. I’ll share that with you.” 

 “Sure, questions, thoughts in general, nothing is barred from our talks.”

“Is there a God?”

Rayanne said without hesitation, “Yes.”

“Why, why then does it seem that some people have perfect lives without doing anything special to deserve them?”

That's it. What works. What doesn't? I'm grateful for every comment you leave. :-)

Weekend Writing Warriors: November 23, 2014

I Hope all the Nano participants are getting it done. :-) And since it's the week we're reminded to take a little time to think about our blessings, I want to add that one of the many things I am grateful for is the group of  incredible, generous writers and readers who stop here week after week to give me encouragement, crits, and food for thought. A big Thanksgiving hug to each and every one of you. <3

We are getting to ready to make a new (Amazon) promotion widget for wewriwa.com.  If you've particpated 4 out of the last five weeks (80%), and would like to be included, drop us a line at wewriwa@yahoo.com  There is no charge. This is a thank you from wewriwa for regular participation. As we've said before, it's all the wonderful particpants (you!) that make wewriwa the great site that it is.

Now, down to business. :-) Weekend Writing Warriors is a weekly bloghop. Each week, participants sign up HERE at wewriwa.com, then post 8 sentences of their work, published or unpublished, to go live between noon, Saturday and 9:00 AM Sunday EST. Then we visit each other and read, comment, critique, encourage--all those things that do a solitary writer's heart good. 
          Snippet Sunday group from facebook--not us, but many of our participants do both, can be found HERE     
          Set up: The MC was vanished without a trace for two years, then returned "without a trace" too. She'd been found in the desert alone after having just given birth. She was investigated for foul play in the disappearance of her newborn.
    In today's snippet, Marissa is meeting with her counselor, Rayanne. Last week, the reader was looking at prints hanging on the walls of  Rayanne's office--through Marissa's eyes. The last sentence was: 

" Tiny shirts and blankets were blowing in a breeze, and clouds dotted a pale blue sky just below the gilded frames."

A perfect scene in a perfect life; all was right. A wind was blowing without a care, and there was a child somewhere in that world, in the life of the lucky person who'd pinched the clothespins over child size clothing. Sadness tugged at Marissa as she gazed at it.  Could she ever have such a perfect life? 

"Penny for your thoughts, Marissa?" 

When she answered, her voice sounded flat to her own ears. "I don't think they're worth even a penny today."  Her wonderful mood, the skip in her step, all left behind with the shadows hiding from the sun in an art print.

That's it. What works. What doesn't?
My wish for you all this Thursday, that you don't have to work, that the food is good, that you're surrounded by people you love and who love you in return.

 Wild turkeys in the field above our house at the end of day. Time to roost. :-)