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Sunday, November 13, 2016

Weekend Writing Warriors November 13, 2016

Hello fellow Warriors (and Snippeteers)! :-)


Weekend Writing Warriors is a weekly bloghop.  Each week, participants sign up HERE at wewriwa.com, then post 8 to 10 sentences of their work, published or unpublished, on their own blog to go live before 9:00 AM Sunday EST. (We check signups to remove links when we don't find a wewriwa post-- to save our participants from clicking on empty links--so please have it live by 9:00 Sunday morning--eastern USA)  Then we visit each other and read, comment, critique, encourage--all those things that do a solitary writer's heart good. Snippet Sunday group from facebook--not us, but many of our participants do both, can be found  HERE.               


This week, I'm changing gears. I have a romance short story coming out in a Victory Tales Press Christmas anthology: Let it Snow. I'll be excerpting from it for several weeks. 
The set up:  Raff, the MC, took in a young, single mother after her home burned. He's been alone for years. It's the end of Thanksgiving day--which has turned out to be a wonderful day for him--that brought back a flood of memories.   Their guests are leaving. "Angie" is his one true love from decades earlier.    





After hot cocoa and decorating the mantel with holly branches and berries, there was a round of hugging and thanking and wishing each other well. Everyone went home, leaving Raff and his little tribe snug in the old farmhouse. 
He lay in bed that night, thinking of how his life had changed. The wave of regret came to visit, like ghosts of unsaid vows and unborn children, reminding him he'd made mistakes. He listened to the wind whistle around the tall stone chimney, and rattle the old windows. Angie, where are you...




  What works and what doesn't? Even though this one is done, I'm grateful for every bit of feedback you share. It might help the next one. :-)
The blurb
Raff, retired and alone, befriends Mandy-a single mother of two who lives down the road from him. The young woman reminds him of Angie, His high-school sweetheart and the only girl her ever loved. He and Angie had planned to spend their lives together, but many years before, on the Christmas they announced they were getting married, her father whisked her away to find a good man, the "right" man.
Three months before Christmas, when the rat-infested mobile home Mandy rents, burns to the ground, he offers to let them stay with him in his big, old farmhouse.
Their short stay turns into a longer one, and Raff discovers that he likes having children in the house, and he likes Mandy's company. She's alone in the world, and he wants to help her and the kids get back on their feet.
As the holidays approach, while Mandy searches for her birth mother and then has to choose whether to meet her or not, Raff is forced to face his memories of the Christmas long ago when Angie broke it off with one phone call, and then she moved away.
Is there still room in his heart for the one true miracle of Christmas… the miracle of love?
Let it Snow will be available soon on Smashwords and on Amazon.

23 comments:

  1. This is lovely, Teresa! The turns of phrase are so eloquent and tender. Wonderful job!!

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  2. I loved the phrase "the wave of regret came to visit." Excellent! This sounds like a wonderful Christmas story.

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    1. Thanks, Jenna. It's always so good to hear when a phrase resonates with a reader. :-)

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  3. A very tender moment. Well done Teresa! My only question is in the blurb. Whose mobile home burns to the ground? Should it be Mandy's?

    History Sleuth's wewriwa mystery

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    1. Yes! Thank you for that catch, Cindy! I just emailed the editor. That blurb was the last thing I did--sent after the ms. Somehow it slipped through. ~sigh~

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  4. Evocative and bittersweet. I usually get little prickly around Christmas love stories, but this one really drew me in.

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    1. :-) Thanks, Alexis! lol--that truly gives me a boost of confidence. :-)

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  5. Well done and poignant. Can't wait to read more of this story!

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  6. You tell a heart warming story, Teresa. Already I'm rooting for him, for Mandy and her kids, for the happy ending. Love, Charmaine

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  7. Very apt = the ghosts of unsaid vows and unborn children.
    I agree with Cindy's questions above - isn't it Mandy's home that burned?

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  8. I love the line "ghosts of unsaid vows." You've shown his deep regrets without ever using the word.

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  9. Aw, you've captured a very poignant fact of holidays...they do bring up ghosts of regret and memory. Nice work!

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  10. I hope he get's back with Angie soon. Distance, especially during holiday season can be very painful

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  11. Yay! Thanks for giving us a Christmas serial to read. What fun!

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  12. You certainly tugged on my heartstrings. I hope he can find true love.

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  13. What a contrast between his (temporarily) full house and his empty heart. It's just like life to have regrets when you're trying to get to sleep. The brain isn't always cooperative!

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  14. Ooo trading one cliffhanger snippet for another... nice! :D

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  15. Loved this story. There was heartache, healing and a promise for happiness. Very sweet.

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  16. A story of lost love and regrets for something that did not happen is always poignant - add in Christmas too, and I reach for the tissues. Great snippet.

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  17. Makes me look forward to holly and hot chocolate - glad to find you are still writing and this one has a home in an anthology too :-)

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