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Sunday, September 15, 2019

WeWriWa: Sporulators 9

WeWriWa: Sporulators 9



  Welcome to Weekend Writing Warriors, where we share snips and bits of amazing tales by talented authors and writers. Each week, participants sign up HERE at wewriwa.com then post 8 to 10 sentences of their work, published or unpublished (we like it all) on their own blog to go live by 9:00 AM each Sunday. Then we visit each other and read and comment, critique, encourage--all those things that do a solitary writer's heart good.
      Snippet Sunday group from facebook, not us, but many of our participants do both, is HERE


      This week's snippet is from a short story, 'Sporulators', more dystopian/scifi, than anything I've written to date.    
     This is Klars talking to Eastwold about the world they're approaching. DESA is short for Department of Ethical and Sustainable Agriculture.


  Could be wonky punctuation to keep within the #wewriwa guidelines.
The last sentence last week was: " Cornfields were forests."


The snippet:
      
     Apple trees had to be trained in much the same manner that hobbyists  used to train bonsai trees.  You do know what a bonsai is, right?”
        Eastwold gritted his teeth but held his silence.   

       “They were building shelters out of cornstalks.” His voice bordered on wispy when he said, “Utopia.” 
        Then, as if he’d jerked out of a daydream, his voice resumed its condescending tone. “The sustainable world. We thought it all inside and out, from the ever-increasing dome sizes—which  I might add--were finally framed in cornstalks rather than metal shipped from off-world, to the small production plants to make dome film out of vegetable oil, even what to use to enhance a plant’s root system. Mycorrhizal inoculants, endophytic molds. Oh, and the mycoparasitic fungi to…”
 
 
 That's it for this week. Thanks for visiting! I am truly grateful for comments, suggestions, and for you taking the time to read it.

32 comments:

  1. Your description of these bioengineered plants inspires the imagination.

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  2. Eastwold seems to have the patience of a Job 🤗

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    1. His patience is being sorely tested. :-) Thanks, Carole!

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  3. WHOA! What in the world is going on here. Okay, I figured out whats going on and it's fascinating. Thanks, dear friend. I'm catching on to the wondrous world you've created.

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  4. All this meticulously planned out, but it doesn't seem they considered that something unexpected could happen. Great snippet!

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    1. Always keep an open mind, right? :-) Thanks, Jessica! :-)

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    1. Yep... It's life. We can guess, but life finds a way to do what life is wont to do... :-) Thanks, Aurora. :-)

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  6. I'd be tuning him out too! An effective snippet...and I'm even more positive things have gone seriously awry on this poor planet.

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  7. Yeah, they planned everything out, sure. Sometimes that doesn't matter so much.

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  8. Whoa, he's really geeking out. Maybe being totally dependent on your abnormal space plants isn't such a good idea?

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  9. Huh, the more someone insists that they've thought of everything, the more convinced I am that they haven't! If your goal is to make me want to slap Klars with a housebrick, then mission accomplished :)

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    1. Now, if Eastwold only had a housebrick around. :-)

      Thanks for visiting, Ian. :-)

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  10. A fantastical bit of bio-engineering. But to at what cost? Can't wait to read more.

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    1. Yeah, at what cost. Everything sits on a scale, everything. When the scale tips... yikes! Thanks, Diane. :-)

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  11. This is fascinating and sounds like the ultimate in sustainable everything. But apparently not. Can't wait to find out what happened. Fantastic story!

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  12. Oh, to be inside your head for a day! You are so imaginative and clever, my friend. Looking forward to the next installment!

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    1. Writers have crazy-cool minds, huh? All of our make-believe friends. lol Thanks, Jules!

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  13. Your imagery of the bio-engineered plants is fascinating.

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  14. Nice plans, but unexpected things can and usually do happen.

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    1. And in the best case, they make for a great story! Thanks, Elaine. :-)

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  15. I suppose it might be a bit annoying to be trying to complete a task and having someone nattering on about training trees. As it happens, I'm fascinated by Bonsai. For now, I think it might be best if mine were made of cloth and wire, however.

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    1. How cool that you enjoy Bonsai! Cloth and wire Bonsai have me intrigued! Thanks for visiting, Cie. :-)

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