WeWriWa: Sporulators 9
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This week's snippet is from a short story, 'Sporulators', more dystopian/scifi, than anything I've written to date.
This is Klars talking to Eastwold about the world they're approaching. DESA is short for Department of Ethical and Sustainable Agriculture.
This is Klars talking to Eastwold about the world they're approaching. DESA is short for Department of Ethical and Sustainable Agriculture.
Could be wonky punctuation to keep within the #wewriwa guidelines.
The last sentence last week was: " Cornfields were forests."
The snippet:
“Apple trees had to be trained in much the same manner that hobbyists used to train bonsai trees. You do know what a bonsai is, right?”
Eastwold gritted his teeth but held his silence.
“They were building shelters out of cornstalks.” His voice bordered on wispy when he said, “Utopia.”
Then, as if he’d jerked out of a daydream, his voice resumed its condescending tone. “The sustainable world. We thought it all inside and out, from the ever-increasing dome sizes—which I might add--were finally framed in cornstalks rather than metal shipped from off-world, to the small production plants to make dome film out of vegetable oil, even what to use to enhance a plant’s root system. Mycorrhizal inoculants, endophytic molds. Oh, and the mycoparasitic fungi to…”
Then, as if he’d jerked out of a daydream, his voice resumed its condescending tone. “The sustainable world. We thought it all inside and out, from the ever-increasing dome sizes—which I might add--were finally framed in cornstalks rather than metal shipped from off-world, to the small production plants to make dome film out of vegetable oil, even what to use to enhance a plant’s root system. Mycorrhizal inoculants, endophytic molds. Oh, and the mycoparasitic fungi to…”
Your description of these bioengineered plants inspires the imagination.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Ed! High praise... :-) <--- Big smile.
DeleteEastwold seems to have the patience of a Job 🤗
ReplyDeleteHis patience is being sorely tested. :-) Thanks, Carole!
DeleteWHOA! What in the world is going on here. Okay, I figured out whats going on and it's fascinating. Thanks, dear friend. I'm catching on to the wondrous world you've created.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Dear friend. Hugs... :-)
DeleteAll this meticulously planned out, but it doesn't seem they considered that something unexpected could happen. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteAlways keep an open mind, right? :-) Thanks, Jessica! :-)
DeleteLots of detailed planning, but....?
ReplyDeleteYep... It's life. We can guess, but life finds a way to do what life is wont to do... :-) Thanks, Aurora. :-)
DeleteI'd be tuning him out too! An effective snippet...and I'm even more positive things have gone seriously awry on this poor planet.
ReplyDeleteBad things ahead. :-) Thanks, Jean! :-)
DeleteYeah, they planned everything out, sure. Sometimes that doesn't matter so much.
ReplyDeleteThe best laid plans... Thanks, Fallon! :-)
DeleteWhoa, he's really geeking out. Maybe being totally dependent on your abnormal space plants isn't such a good idea?
ReplyDeleteIndeed! Thanks, Alexis. :-)
DeleteThe perfect plan . . . until . . .
ReplyDeleteBeware the perfect plan. :-) Thanks, Nancy!
DeleteHuh, the more someone insists that they've thought of everything, the more convinced I am that they haven't! If your goal is to make me want to slap Klars with a housebrick, then mission accomplished :)
ReplyDeleteNow, if Eastwold only had a housebrick around. :-)
DeleteThanks for visiting, Ian. :-)
A fantastical bit of bio-engineering. But to at what cost? Can't wait to read more.
ReplyDeleteYeah, at what cost. Everything sits on a scale, everything. When the scale tips... yikes! Thanks, Diane. :-)
DeleteThis is fascinating and sounds like the ultimate in sustainable everything. But apparently not. Can't wait to find out what happened. Fantastic story!
ReplyDeleteThey tried. ;-) Thanks, Jenna! :-)
DeleteOh, to be inside your head for a day! You are so imaginative and clever, my friend. Looking forward to the next installment!
ReplyDeleteWriters have crazy-cool minds, huh? All of our make-believe friends. lol Thanks, Jules!
DeleteYour imagery of the bio-engineered plants is fascinating.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Karen! It is actually my 40+ job. :-)
DeleteNice plans, but unexpected things can and usually do happen.
ReplyDeleteAnd in the best case, they make for a great story! Thanks, Elaine. :-)
DeleteI suppose it might be a bit annoying to be trying to complete a task and having someone nattering on about training trees. As it happens, I'm fascinated by Bonsai. For now, I think it might be best if mine were made of cloth and wire, however.
ReplyDeleteHow cool that you enjoy Bonsai! Cloth and wire Bonsai have me intrigued! Thanks for visiting, Cie. :-)
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