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Showing posts with label holiday short story. Show all posts
Showing posts with label holiday short story. Show all posts

Sunday, September 22, 2024

Wewriwa: The Silent Stars Go By 2

                                            


Welcome to a weekly post of Weekend Writing Warriors. If you'd like to check it out or give it a try, click here to go to wewriwa.blogspot.com

I'm working on some short stories, second-chance romance set during the holidays. Almost finished with story #4. My plan is to learn the process by publishing a short story collection. Is that a good idea or a bad idea? Any pitfalls to that route vs. publishing a one-story novel?

This snippet is from story #3, "The Silent Stars Go By". (Still working on this blurb.)

Ace Ridley and Ashley Pence made a promise when they were seniors in high school. They'd go to college then join the Air Force, do their stint so Ashley could fly, then come back home to the farm, get married, and raise their family.

They never planned on Ace not qualifying to fly, and in an unbelievable twist, for Ashley to qualify for NASA.

Over two decades later, Ace knows well how things can go wrong, and promises can be broken. He can't forgive that. Or can he? When, Ashely visits her parents, he runs into her. Against odds, they spend several days together,  But what looks like a promising rekindling of affection turns to anger when Ace can't find a way to move forward.

He'll need to swallow his pride long enough to explain his side...and listen to hers if there is going to be a chance for them.

Continuing from the last snippet:

           He tried to do that a couple of times a week. The nearly two decades since his dad’s stroke had taught him there was always something they needed a hand with. He supposed it was pride that kept his dad from picking up the phone and calling him to ask for help. While he took off his work boots, his father shuffled into the kitchen, nudging his walker in front of him.

The Snippet

             “Son, how many acres you pick today?” His words were a tad garbled, an effect of the paralysis crippling one side of his body.

“Just the front fields. The ones in the back are still wet. I don’t know which’ll happen first—if they’ll dry or if the ground’ll winter-up.”

His dad nodded. “With luck, we’ll get deep frost this year, kill the bugs in the soil.”

“You stay for dinner,” his mom said. “I figured you in when I counted potatoes for the pot.”


A little more...


He smiled. There was no use fighting Beatrice Ridley. Didn’t matter if she was running her own kitchen or unofficially directing everyone at the church suppers.

She worked at the stove with her back to Ace and his dad. “Are you bringing anyone for Christmas dinner?”

He knew that question was coming before she’d asked it. The tone of her voice sounded so casual, like it was a random question that’d just popped into her mind when she added, “Will Ashley be home for the holidays?”

Ace held his breath and silently counted. When he reached ten, a calm reply prevailed—which was what he wanted. He didn’t like arguing with his mom—with either of his parents, for that matter. And he reminded himself that his mom was worried about him being lonely. And she worried about Ashley, too. Ash would always be family to his parents.

Not to him, though. Not since she’d broken their promise, the one they’d made when they were seniors in high school. When they decided their futures would be one. Singular. Working toward one goal. Their education, a farm, a family of their own.  

That's it. Have a great week!


Saturday, November 19, 2016

Weekend Writing Warriors November 20, 2016


Hello fellow Warriors (and Snippeteers)! :-)


Weekend Writing Warriors is a weekly bloghop.  Each week, participants sign up HERE at wewriwa.com, then post 8 to 10 sentences of their work, published or unpublished, on their own blog to go live before 9:00 AM Sunday EST. (We check signups to remove links when we don't find a wewriwa post-- to save our participants from clicking on empty links--so please have it live by 9:00 Sunday morning--eastern USA)  Then we visit each other and read, comment, critique, encourage--all those things that do a solitary writer's heart good. Snippet Sunday group from facebook--not us, but many of our participants do both, can be found  HERE.               


This week, I'm posting another snippet from Christmas romance a short story that was included in an anthology from Victory Tales Press: Let it Snow. I'll be excerpting from it for several weeks. 
The set up:”  Raff, the MC, is doing a bit of reflecting about the farm he lives on--giving the reader a glimpse into his character. In this part of the story, the reader already knows that for the most part, Raff's grandparents raised him.

His grandma had left it to him. She wrote it in her will that it had always been his grandfather's fondest wish, that Raff would live on the farm and maybe even work the land.
He smiled at the thought. Him? A farmer? It may have been in his genes, but he'd only barely taken it to heart. Though that was sort of sad, the mere fact that the proverbial apple can fall far from the tree was also sometimes a blessing. Considering his own parents, that had been the case. The alcoholism that consumed their lives had not become his destiny.


  What works and what doesn't? Even though this one is done, I'm grateful for every bit of feedback you share. It might help the next one. :-)
The blurb
Raff, retired and alone, befriends Mandy-a single mother of two who lives down the road from him. The young woman reminds him of Angie, His high-school sweetheart and the only girl her ever loved. He and Angie had planned to spend their lives together, but many years before, on the Christmas they announced they were getting married, her father whisked her away to find a good man, the "right" man.
Three months before Christmas, when the rat-infested mobile home Mandy rents, burns to the ground, he offers to let them stay with him in his big, old farmhouse.
Their short stay turns into a longer one, and Raff discovers that he likes having children in the house, and he likes Mandy's company. She's alone in the world, and he wants to help her and the kids get back on their feet.
As the holidays approach, while Mandy searches for her birth mother and then has to choose whether to meet her or not, Raff is forced to face his memories of the Christmas long ago when Angie broke it off with one phone call, and then she moved away.
Is there still room in his heart for the one true miracle of Christmas… the miracle of love?
Let it Snow is available on Smashwords and on Amazon.