Weekend Writing Warriors is a weekly blog-hop. Each week, participants sign up HERE at Weekend Writing Warriors, then post 8 sentences of their work, published or unpublished, to go live between 12:00 noon Saturday, and 9:00 AM Sunday EST. Then we visit each other, read, comment, critique, encourage--all those great things that do a solitary writer's heart good.
Set up: This week is a big change-up. If you participated in SixSunday, you might recall that I posted some journal entries from my MC, who is homeless and delusional. This scene takes place pretty early in the book. Rissa (in her dreams) is actually Marissa in the here and now reality.
She's convinced that her "crazy" dreams are actually memories of two years of her life and of a missing newborn baby. I know. A lot to take in. Swordplay, her handsome lover Cuylrh, her friend Jia, troublemaker Dhurstan, and the evil Daekartha all exist in her dreams.
This is part of a journal entry. Izzy is at the desk of the shelter during the night shift. I'll continue it next week. Journal entries are part of reality.
*note You might encounter creative punctuation :-)
That's it. What jumps out at you, good or bad ? I'd love to hear it and am truly grateful for every bit of criticism, opinion, and shared wisdom. Thank you so much for visiting! Sundays are extra busy for me right now, so it might take me several days to return visits, but I will. Have a great week, all!