Today, author Steven Montano shares with us about his latest release, Red Tide at Morning. At the end of the post, I've left my review of the book. Thanks for joining us!
Teresa: You've been writing dark
fantasy/dystopian for quite some time now. And you have amassed a respectable
book catalog in that genre. It seems that when you write in the same genre,
what happens in one story might actually spawn an idea for the next. Having said
that, where did the idea of Red Tide at Morning come from?
Steven: I
decided to write a murder mystery about a year ago, around the time both the Blood Skies series and The Skullborn Trilogy were winding down
and I was trying to decide what direction to go with my writing. My wife is a huge fan of the genre, and the
challenge of writing a mystery novel appealed to me. (I was further motivated when an author
friend of mine, Joe Hart, went and wrote a thriller called The River Is Dark after he’d already made a name crafting horror
novels; his effort really inspired me).
I’m
honestly not sure exactly where the idea for Red Tide At Morning came from, but the first image I had in my mind
as I put together the story was a slightly modified version of the opening
sequence, with the dead girl being found in a small abandoned village on the
island and all of the action taking place just ahead of a coming ice
storm. The early version of the novel
was called Colder, and it had more
occult ties and a “race against time” aspect that I eventually cut for the more
subdued approach I took with the final version.
I
didn’t continue working on the book at the time but kept it in the back of my
mind, and I was about to delve into the project when inspiration for The Last Acolyte came at me like a bolt
from the blue and essentially took over my creative brain for a few
months. Eventually I decided it was high
time to finally write the mystery, so in preparation I binge-watched procedural
police shows and read tons of mystery novels, and I conducted a crap-ton of
research on forensics, police biographies, criminal psychology, true crime
reports, etc.
Whereas
normally at this point I’d just jump in with the writing, instead I continued
to take extensive notes, mapped out the plot, and planned individual scenes and
chapters down to an almost insane degree of detail. It was...exhausting. LOL
Teresa: That is fascinating stuff, Steven! It's always so interesting to learn what engages another writer's creative energies. And we're glad you're pushing through your exhaustion to talk with us. ~winking~ Can you share anything you've learned
from writing a book in a different genre?
Steven: I
think the biggest thing I realized the moment I started writing this book was
that I would not be able to take my
normal approach to drafting a novel.
Usually I like to come up with just a loose outline: a solid plot, a
good sense of the ending, maybe a chapter breakdown with one or two major
events per chapter, and that’s it. That
doesn’t really work with a mystery novel, where you have to carefully plan
events from beginning to end and know exactly when and where you’re going to
drop plot details so the reader uncovers them at the appropriate time. Now, one could argue that’s the case for any novel, but I think it’s especially
true for a book like this.
Research,
as I mentioned before, was a huge factor for Red Tide At Morning, because even though I was writing about a
fictional island the setting is the modern world, and I wanted very much to
make sure I got the details right; that’s pretty easy when you know the
fantasy/sci-fi world you’re writing like the back of your hand, but in this
case I quickly realized I didn’t know @!#?@! about things like
crime scene preservation, hacking into a cell phone, or what the inside of a
Lutheran church looks like. That led to
even more research.
Perhaps
most significant, though, is the difference in writing language. In epic fantasy, it’s not only okay if you
take a few pages to describe the landscape and important places, it’s
practically expected. In a mystery novel, details are important,
but description itself is often kept to a minimum in order to allow better
story flow. Needless to say, this was
tough for me, but having my wife go through the first few chapters with a
chainsaw to hack away all excessive description (aka “65% of the words”) got me
in the right rhythm.
It
was easily the most challenging time I’ve ever had writing a novel. It was also the most rewarding, and I’d
happily do it again.
About the book:
RED
TIDE AT MORNING
A
dead girl on the beach. A college student found tortured to death in an
abandoned cottage. An ex-soldier with a history of violence. A small-time drug
lord whose influence is on the rise. A mysterious woman watching from the
shadows. A camera pointed the wrong way.
Something
dangerous is happening in Raven’s Passage.
Retired
Detective Malcolm Stone hoped to never work another murder case ever again.
After the tragic death of his partner on the harrowing streets of Philadelphia,
all Mal wanted was to come home to the quiet Pacific Northwest island he grew
up on and get on with his life. But when a shocking double homicide shakes the
community, Mal finds himself pulled back into a world he thought he’d left
behind.
Along
with his step-sister Lara — a troubled loner with a keen investigative mind —
Malcolm digs deep into the lives of the two dead girls, uncovering scars and
secrets best left alone. Surrounded by suspects ranging from an ambitious drug
dealer and his delinquent son to the psychotic ex-flame of one of the victim’s
fathers, Malcolm and Lara race to find a connection between the victims and
uncover the truth…before a deadly killer strikes again.
Embark
on a dark and twisted mystery from the author of Blood Skies, The Last Acolyte
and The Skullborn Trilogy.
Now
on sale!
Teresa: Thanks so much, Steven! And now I'll share my review of Red Tide at Morning.
Let me first say that I think the book is outstanding, a real page-tuner. I read it during a particularly busy three day period. All the while I was busy with life, my mind kept going back to the story. I wanted to read more. I needed to find out whodunnit. :-)
Montano is incredibly adept at showing a story, at painting scenes. With his background in Dystopian-noir, he's well-versed in drenching a scene with descriptive writing. And that's great, because readers of Dystopian have never seen that world before. We need to have it painted for us by the author's words. But while reading Red Tide, I couldn't help but be amazed that he'd shifted away from drenching a scene with description, to moving to a style that fits murder/mystery so much better.
This story takes place here on Earth, in current times. That means we don't need have to have every little detail described for us like we do for genres like Dystopian and Scify. And Montano seems to have intuitively known how much description was enough. It painted a nice scene, but didn't bog down the action with too many details.
The pacing is fast. The hooks keep coming. The characters come to life. And it was easy to get caught up in the main character's world. Throughout the story, I guessed at who had done the murders. I was pretty sure a couple of times, but then Montano threw a new twist in the plot, or added a few more clues that forced me to rethink who had done the killing. In fact, you could have knocked me over with a feather when I turned the last few pages and realized who had done it.
Amazing genre switch with wonderful results.
You can check out the beginning of the book using the "Look Inside" feature at Amazon
Check out Steven's blog HERE for all the news about his books.
And he's on Twitter Another great way to find out what he's writing.
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