Hello fellow warriors. :-) Less than two weeks till Christmas. I hope youre all feeling some Christmas joy. It's a different year for sure.
Welcome to Weekend Writing Warriors. If you'd like to participate or read tempting morsels from other authors, please sign up--or check the linky list at: http://wewriwa.blogspot.com/
Also, check out the Snippet Sunday group on facebook.
This snippet is from Emmily, Unbound, an SFR story. To read a compilation of all snippets posted for this story, click Here: Emmily Unbound, Chapters 1 & 2 Emmily, the main character, has lost pretty much everything in the last twelve months: her marriage, her parents, her job, and her house. She and her dog, Murphy, have moved to the mountains of Pennsylvania into an old, remote, hunting camp her parents willed to her. On her first day there, along a desolate road she's been forced at gunpoint to haul a wounded man and his 'crew' to her house.
Most of the blonds seem to like it—and have admitted they’ve never tried it before. Huh? Who has not at least taken a sip?
Now, the snippet:
Two heaping carts and another level cart later, we head to the checkout. I expect it to be a big bill, and I’m not disappointed. Kade studies the receipt as I load our haul into the car. I don’t think he grasps money denominations yet. But who knows? They seem to be picking up things fast, like English.
Who am I kidding? It’s the human language they’re learning, not just English. My heart speeds up.
A few more lines if you wish to read on:
No. Nope. Might be denial, but there’s some kind of reasonable explanation.
They’ve been here just one week, and they rarely pause while talking, and they no longer cock their heads like they did the first few days. Strange.
I can wonder about this later. Right now, I have a job to do.
It feels like it takes
forever to get it all organized in the SUV. Then Kade says, “I have a list from
Genrael.”
Now what do you suppose is on that list?
I know a lot of people who don't understand money. For a lot of years, I was one of them. I always figured there would be more where what I just spent came from. Then I ended up disabled. Good times!
ReplyDeleteShe knows who they are in the back of her mind, but is still very much in denial. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteYeah, definitely in denial.
ReplyDeleteEvery time someone vows never to fall in love again ends up falling off the wagon. I admire her determination, but looks like she's going to fail in that department. Neat snippet, Teresa!
ReplyDeleteWe always look for the reasonable explanation before making an impossible leap. But what is on that list, I wonder?
ReplyDeleteI'm sure they're picking up on "human" things even faster than she realizes. I'm definitely curious about that list, too! Great snippet, Teresa!
ReplyDeleteThe image of three full carts really does speak of otherwordly needs. Denial is getting harder.
ReplyDeleteThe reference to Genrael's list makes me wonder what their plan is. Glad to see her denial is crumbling.
ReplyDeleteToo many questions - where did they get the money to pay for supplies? I gather Emmily lost everything. And yes - what's on the ew list?
ReplyDeleteI love the distinction between English and the human language. It's appropriate and a bit thought-provoking.
ReplyDeleteNice time to tell her there's another list! I agree with Ed's comment - really well done and cool distinction between the 'languages'. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteArgh - nothing like finding out there is another list when you think you are done shopping.
ReplyDeleteTweeted.
Seems there is a plan coming to light. Telling her now seems as if is giving her little opportunity to say 'no.'
ReplyDeleteNow that food is taken care of, I can only imagine what's on that list. I hope it's really random parts to repair their ship, like "duct tape" and "thermonuclear reactor."
ReplyDelete